The writing and emotion behind the story are really good. But I don't feel there was any point to this story as a one off. I think it would fit better as a part of a longer story- which would be really good.
But at any rate, I think you captured the emotion in this really well! Congrats! Report Review
I really don't know what to think
I have to admit the story was well written and the emotions involved are very easy to get caught into even in so short a story but come on
Being a guy I would like to believe that not all guys are liar's maybe Sirius isn't lying you know
I mean for heaven sake
the story was really good, I wasn't going to review though because I felt to much like this is the kind of story that has caused several of my female coworkers to come to the conclusion that all Men will cheat on you eventually.
However you had only recieved one review so far so I felt like I had to say something
Good Job but don't forget not all guys are pigs its just harder to forget being mistreated. Report Review
This is Cool (:
xAuthor's Response: thank you so much. Report Review
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