Okay, I am Irish. =] and I did notice a few mistakes in the speech, such as 'dag' they say it as 'da' and I think the girls are the most worst to understand than the men as they tend to shout while talking, and they would say 'you' as 'ye'
but still going to read on, please update asap!Author's Response: Note that they're gypsies, though. They don't speak the same as regular Irish folk. :)
I know the dag is right, but the 'ye' sounds like something that I missed. Thanks!
Thank you for the review, and I will. :D Report Review
Omg!! You don't know how happy I was when I saw that you updated this story!! I just had to leave a review.
I still love it, and the way you write Sirius is just wonderful. I always imagined that he cut off Peter's finger with his Marauders knife when they got into a fight with one another, but your one is nice to.
I hope you update really soon!Author's Response: I was under the impression that mine was canon. -eyebrow raise-
Anywho, I'm glad to know that you were happy to see an update! It's nice to get a regular reviewer for one of my newer stories!
The whole thing is written; I just have to update the chapters. :) Report Review
that was nice. I always thought that he just escaped and then found that picture with the Weasley family and the rat. But I suppose he would have needed something to get out of prison for and prove his innocents, which would be getting Peter and showing everyone that he's still alive.
I like Sirius as a character, he seems really complex and I rarely come across a story that's focused on him after the Marauder era. I really cannot wait to see where this story it going to go!! please update asap!Author's Response: Wow! FIRST REVIEWER! WOO!
Thank you so much for your amazing compliments! They really made my day, honestly. The whole story is already written; and, with my new Trusted Author Status, you won't have to wait long for chapters. I promise!
The chapter you just read is the first of five. Thanks so much for the review! Report Review
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