I enjoyed this! Always good to read about the Weasley twins - and their particular brand of humour can be rather difficult! I think you handled them rather well. The story flowed brilliantly, and you captured their emotions on their opening day perfectly. Bravo.

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:D This was so fun to read! It was really well written with good vocabulary (sorry, I sound like a teacher :D) and I thought that the way that Fred and George interacted with each other was perfect!
I loved the end too. :)

10/10

TheDirigiblePlum

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I am very pleased you liked it so much and I'm thrilled you think they worked well, both with each other and in the story. Thanks again!

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This was a fun one shot to read. I liked reading the story, especially with the bleching clock. That made me laugh the most. I liked how at the end it says: "After a few moments of staring, they said in perfect unison, “We need an assistant.” And bursting into twin shouts of laughter, they emptied the register and began counting their profits." That is so typical of Fred and George! Very good story indeed.

Author's Response: Hey, thanks! I appreciate the comments, and I'm glad you enjoyed the story!

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I liked this. It was light, fluffy, and just adorable (if that's the right word for this, I'm not sure). I thought Fred and George were really IC, and it was a pretty neat idea to write abotu opening day.

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for sharing an opinion; I'm glad you enjoyed it! And I am THRILLED you felt they were in character - I'm always afraid of messing it up! Thanks again!

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