aw that was just adorable! i like how you changed what happened in the tournament to suit the story instead of making something stupid up like Cedric had come back from the dead..
10/10Author's Response: Haha, yeah, I'm a fan of realism :P Thanks for reading, and I'm very glad you enjoyed it! :) Report Review
that was nice. most of the harry/cedric stories are all about harry's heartbreak after cedric died, but it's nice to read of cedric up and about... 10/10! good job!
-xoxo, rowenaravenclaw94Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I just needed to have Cedric survive this time...it was a cathartic piece to write, and I loved it. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for reading! :) Report Review
Not bad. Not bad at all. A little dry if you ask me. Next time try something that details, just a little bit. Not much, mind you. Just enough to get a mental picture in ones head. But, otherwise, brilliant. Keep writing, mate. T-T-F-N.Author's Response: Thanks, I do try my best...I'll keep that in mind for next time. :) Report Review
I found this quite by chance, so I was pleasantly surprised by your end-note. I am sorry for the loss of your friend, however. I hope you don't mind that I've mentioned it/linked to it on my page of Cedric recs. I'd put a link to the page, but the review system here won't allow them. The page is on my website, and I just updated it this month.Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I'm a great admirer of your Aorist Subjunctive, so I'm deeply honored... ^_^ Thank you for the review! Report Review
I'm sorry about your friend. I really enjoyed your story because I just came out about my sexuality and I didn't know there were stories like this. It makes me feel better about myself and I really thank you for this story!
neville5Author's Response: Thank you so much...it means a lot to me!
By the way, can I ask you? Was this realistic or too over the top? I'm very much straight, so I wasn't sure if I was doing it right at all...
If you want to read more stories like this one, I can give you a few recommendations. I'm just settling into reading slash fics...and there are some good ones out there. Report Review
I donít normally read Slash, but I was pleasantly surprised! Very well written and entertaining. Your descriptions are excellent.
The plot was a bit obvious and a couple of bits donít read very well in my opinion, but overall, a great read.
Well done! 7/10Author's Response: Thank you! Please, feel free to tell me which parts you don't like, and I might be able to fix them...I'd credit you for suggestions of course. My guess would be the "equal" sections? Those annoyed me the most, I think. :D Report Review
Aw, I'm really sorry to hear of your loss, you've written him a really great story!Author's Response: Thank you! That means a lot to me... :) Report Review
i love it. it's just fluffy enough to make a girl smile. you did a great jobAuthor's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! :D Report Review
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