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Review #1, by sandals Chapter 9

15th February 2011:
The explanation Hermione gave Ron about her and Harry's relationship was lame. Harry loves Ginny but before either he or Hermione know it they're in a sexual relationship? And then before you know it they have a kid together? And it didn't seem to freak them out or change their relationship at all. It's like they're both perfectly fine with having an unplanned kid; it's just one of those things that happens all the time, right? Not only that, but Ginny acts like it doesn't even bother her that the man she loves had a kid with another woman right under her nose, and that he still spends a lot of time with his ex-lover. When has this ever happened in reality?

Also, I get that Ron did a terrible thing by leaving, but everybody blames him and dumps on him every chapter, and completely ignore how destroyed he must feel knowing that his biggest fear--Harry and Hermione hooking up--happened. Not only that, they had a kid, a living reminder to him everyday that they had a sexual relationship. But Ron's a bastard, right? So his feelings don't count.

Author's Response: Okay, first of all, as explained, this is just changing slightly a cliche. Maybe I don't do it very well, But I'm making fun of it. I do not care about that stuff because it simply doesn't matter.

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Review #2, by i_love_harry_12721 Chapter 11

24th April 2010:
omg i just looove lily! she is the sweetest little girl ever. and yay, hermione forgave ron!

Author's Response: Lily is so sweet and awesome :D. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~ginny_malfoy22


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Review #3, by Harry and Ginny Chapter 11

24th April 2010:
i liked how Ginny couldn't hold herself and wait 4 Hermione to tell her how she and Ron were doing, it was a funny moment lol. i can't wait to read more!^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: Yeah, I can imagine Ginny being so impatient to know what was going on, it's her brother and her best friend and they're so perfect for each other! Thanks for reading and reviewing, and I will try to update around work, school, assignments, and other fics. :)

~ginny_malfoy22


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Review #4, by xMsFiggx Chapter 11

11th April 2010:
Yay they're moving in the right direction! Lily is so precious. Great update!

Author's Response: Lily is gorgeous :D Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~ginny_malfoy22


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Review #5, by BrendillywithHP4evr Chapter 8

22nd December 2009:
omg i almost cryed on the part Harry and Ginny was explaining to Lily

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Review #6, by BrendillywithHP4evr Chapter 6

22nd December 2009:
WHOA WHOA~ I LOVE THE TURN OF HER PREGNANCY!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing.

~ginny_malfoy22


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Review #7, by BrendillywithHP4evr Chapter 3

22nd December 2009:
wow good story! Keep writing! please :)

Author's Response: I will! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~ginny_malfoy22


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Review #8, by addaweasley Chapter 10

9th November 2009:
Love your story. very original (in the HP fanfic world). Youstay true to the characters that we know & love. Update soon. Please.
Ron & Hermione 4eva

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it, and I'm glad you think I'm staying true to the characters. I will be updating in December, not a moment sooner, because of NaNoWriMo. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxox

~ginny_malfoy22


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Review #9, by WeCunningFolksUseAnyMeans Chapter 10

30th October 2009:
aww :) i loved this chapter! espicaly the ginny/charlota interfrarance! and a drunk hermonie! lovvvee it!

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it, thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxox

~ginny_malfoy22


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Review #10, by Harry and Ginny Chapter 10

30th October 2009:
wow! this is awesome! Ron and Hermione finally kissed and i hope they'll now work on their problems. will u update soon please? by the way, will u update " A Perfect Life" and "Splitting at the Seams " please?^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: I will try to update them all in December. I'm doing NaNoWriMo, so I will not be updating ANY stories until December. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxox

~ginny_malfoy22


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Review #11, by LateKate Chapter 9

25th October 2009:
Oooh! Katie likey plotty Ginny! Oh, the possiblities for match-making! This is gonna be funnn! seriously, awesome fic and I cannot wait for more, although the wording on that last sentence was a little confusing.

Author's Response: The possibilities, I know! I can't wait for the next chapter myself, I can't wait to see how I will write it and what will happen. What do you mean by the wording in the last sentence? I'l go check. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxox

~ginny_malfoy22


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Review #12, by WeCunningFolksUseAnyMeans Chapter 9

21st October 2009:
love the story!!
and love the ron-hermonieee actionn!!
update soonn!! love it

Author's Response: I'll try to update this weekend before November. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxox

~ginny_malfoy22


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Review #13, by WeCunningFolksUseAnyMeans Chapter 8

21st October 2009:
this is officiialy the cutest story ever.

Author's Response: I'm glad you think that. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxox

~ginny_malfoy22


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Review #14, by WeCunningFolksUseAnyMeans Chapter 7

21st October 2009:
lillyyy is adorabllle! love love love it!

Author's Response: She is adorable, glad you're enjoying it, thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxox

~ginny_malfoy22


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Review #15, by WeCunningFolksUseAnyMeans Chapter 6

21st October 2009:
awww. another babieee. i just find it realy akward that its like a 3 parent family... with 1 daddy and 2 mommies that are all so close... kinda strange for lilly..
but love the story!

Author's Response: It is wierd, but in this day and age, there are a lot of divorced and broken families. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxox

~ginny_malfoy22


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Review #16, by WeCunningFolksUseAnyMeans Chapter 5

21st October 2009:
awww. lilly is adorable. and good for ronn!

Author's Response: Lily is gorgeous! I love her! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxox

~ginny_malfoy22


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Review #17, by WeCunningFolksUseAnyMeans Chapter 4

21st October 2009:
hehehe. wayy to go charlotta!! i like her :) lol
lovee the story

Author's Response: I'll be honest, I like Carlotta a lot as well...I need a way to bring her into the story more. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxox

~ginny_malfoy22


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Review #18, by WeCunningFolksUseAnyMeans Chapter 3

21st October 2009:
i agree withh hermoniee. and looking fowadr to jay and charoltta!! :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxox

~ginny_malfoy22


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Review #19, by WeCunningFolksUseAnyMeans Chapter 2

21st October 2009:
iikneewitt!!
lol and im suprised charoltta didnt sayy anything...hmm. lol love the story!

Author's Response: I know...but Carlotta wants to figure everything out before she says anything, I guess. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxox

~ginny_malfoy22


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Review #20, by WeCunningFolksUseAnyMeans Chapter 1

21st October 2009:
lovee it so far...
and charlotta's brother is deefff meeting up with hermonie!!! lol love it

Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it, thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxox

~ginny_malfoy22


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Review #21, by addaweasley Chapter 9

21st October 2009:
i love it. More Ron & Hermione. But poor Jay. And how cute is Lily & her crying over how Daddy won't love her as much & then Hermione makes her excited about it. Just a tiny ask, can Lily spend some time with George & the older Weasley boys. your story is awesome. Keep on updating & i will R&R

Author's Response: She definitely will b e speding more time with the older Weasleys, don't worry about that! :D And the next chapter should be Ronmione-tastic! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxox

~ginny_malfoy22


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Review #22, by Harry and Ginny Chapter 9

19th October 2009:
wow! i wasn't expecting Hermione to kiss Ron but i hope whatever Ginny has planned, it goes well. will u update soon please?^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: It will go well...better than she thought it would (and better than she wants to think ;)). I'll try to update before NaNoWriMo. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxox

~ginny_malfoy22


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Review #23, by Roxy Chapter 1

19th October 2009:
This story sounds kind of cheesy. Harry cuts the umbilical cord?

Author's Response: I know. But it's taking the cliche and changing just one thing. If you don't like it, don't read it. Thanks for reading and reviewing

~ginny_malfoy22


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Review #24, by miss_phoenixfeather Chapter 9

18th October 2009:
Awesome, I love it! very different to the others :) please update soon

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxox

~ginny_malfoy22


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Review #25, by lovehp Chapter 8

22nd September 2009:
this is good. really interesting twist in the story! but i wonder if maybe you could put in something more about why harry and hermione had a baby? like did they have a relationship while ron was gone? ginny was ok with that? or was there some deeper reason as to why harry and hermione got pregnant?

just something i was wondering about. great story though i really like this angle. please update when you have time!

Author's Response: It is actually explained in the story that Harry and Hermione were in a relationship, they got together about three months after Ron left, and they were together until Lily was about three months old or something like that. I'll explain it better in a future chapter then. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxox

~ginny_malfoy22


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