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Review #1, by ginny321 Lucky I'm In Love

9th October 2008:
Very good, and quite humorous.
10/10, as usual.

Author's Response: Thank you!

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Review #2, by Lemon Juice Lucky I'm In Love

7th October 2008:
Hey! Here from the forums.I like the idea. It's very original and sweet. I think that this is worth improving and continuing. If you are worried about reviews/reads you should popularize it on the forums, and ask for reviews. People want to help! Anyways, my main critique is that it is very short. Most chapters are around 2,000 words. I think you could improve a lot by adding some descriptions to make the story flow more easily. Your time between their conversation and Alice coming back is somewhat skewed. Honestly, I wasn't even aware that she had left. I think that with a little more description and a bit of work on the how your story flows, this could be really good.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and the critique! I'll definitely work on that. :]

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