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Review #1, by FredWeasleyIsMyKing Love

19th March 2015:

I'm here for gryffindor in the review competition :)

So this was lovely. I love how you focused on the love these pair have for each other. It was so tangible throughout. Every action and description of them just oozed how they felt for each other so great job on that.
Your descriptions were really lovely. I thought you did a great job. The nervousness of James to start with looking all fancy in his dress robes, then lily walking down the aisle looking like a dream to James. So cute.

The one speech I was disappointed not to get was Sirius. As best man he really ought to have done one ;) James and Lily's were nice of course, I just think Sirius' would have been cheeky, and a nice contrast perhaps? Jut my two cents anyway, feel free to ignore me!!

All in all though I thought you did a great job of filling in this missing moment piece :)


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Review #2, by Arna Hex  Love

28th May 2009:
That was not as happy as I thought it would be.

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Review #3, by jasmine potter Love

13th May 2009:
it could have been more romantic

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Review #4, by Annie Love

4th January 2009:
Agh...that was small. But nice

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Review #5, by Moondanser83 Love

27th October 2008:
Aww... so fluffy ;)
I really liked this, it was the perfect wedding that everyone dreams of, and they deffinetly deserved the perfection. Ironicly enough I really liked that fact that you marred the perfection of the day by bringing forwards Sirius jealousy and fears of abandonment

Great job


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