This story is very good. I'm not usually very fond of the works that violate cannon, but for some reason, probably because of the interesting character you've created, I find it curiously compelling. I particularly love the synesthetic aspect of her character. As a pseudo-magical talent it makes the character much more interesting, as well as providing a unique aspect to the story, which separates it as a unique creation. I am looking forward to its continued development.
Just as an aside, I would assume from the context that you're using "hueca" as the Spanish adjective like "cabeza hueca" "empty headed" meaning in itself, "empty".Author's Response: Wow. Just, wow. I have been having trouble with this story. Trouble with getting it on to other sites, trouble with not getting reviews, and trouble going on to write more with all that. But, this review makes me want to write more. Thanks.
Yeah, that's how I was using the word "hueca". I live in Argentina and we use it like air-head. Te felicito for being right Report Review
I'm sorry I haven't reviewed sooner. (Three chapters in urgh.) I'm also sorry I haven't found you, and this story sooner. Completely brilliant. My word. I'm loving it to bits, characterisations are spot on, and I've never thought the Weasley's were an easy bunch to manage...
I just want to read more, so I'll leave it at that. But yes, I love you. Heh.
-Rose.Author's Response: Aw, I more than forgive you. You will be reading more as soon as I am sure that the next chapter is absolutely perfect, which should be very soon.
I love the Weasley family, but I agree with you that they wouldn't be an easy bunch. That's half the fun of writing about them, though. Report Review
I love Celine. She is my kind of girl. Totally a kick-a$$ character!Author's Response: She would be very flattered, I'm sure. Report Review
I love the French, even though I don't speak it. I speak Spanish, but I think I got the gist of what was said. Keep it up!Author's Response: Yeah, I am fluent in the Argentine form of Spanish but I like French much more even though what I know of it is just what I've gotten out of class. Report Review
So I am going back to leave a review on all your chapters. O like this one it really draws you into the story.Author's Response: Thanks! These reviews are making my day. Report Review
I love it. You are very good at characterization.Author's Response: Thank you, I've been working on Celine for almost two years, so if her character was spottily written I would be very unhappy. Report Review
I love this story so far. I have been reading for like an hour now. Keep it up. I'll try to leave a review on each chapter. I have a story posted if you are interested in reading it =).Author's Response: Since you are my new favorite person, I will definitely go read it! Report Review
great so far update soonAuthor's Response: wow, you're my first update on this story!!
You deserve an award or something.
I will update very soon, no need to worry.
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