That was very good, I like your view on Regulus and Gentry splitting up. I always did think it was a shame there wasn't a girl so yours was very good.Author's Response: I think there should have been a girl in the middle of Sirius and Regulus. She probably would've kept the two in line a little better.
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he hasa biggerstaff for her.HAHAHA
padfoot rulessAuthor's Response: Prongs owns you Report Review
i like this chapter alot
lol the inside joke
hahahaAuthor's Response: leave the biggerstaff alone Padfoot
i like it
it is sweet!
i love how she called him RABBIT
this chapter rocks my socks
PADFOOT RULES ALL!
Author's Response: She calls him Rabbit alot. And Snuffles gets called a mangy mutt!
Love Ya Pads
Prongs Report Review
JAMES GOT SOME
UH OHH PADFOOT IS GONNA BE FUCKING PISSED IF HE FINDS OUT
padfoot rules Author's Response: Shockingly Padfoot's okay with it. IRONY!
See Ya Pads Report Review
wow good intro i like it so far!
PADFOOT ROCKS YOUR SOCKS!!
hahaAuthor's Response: Prongs Loves Ya Mrs_RonaldWeasly
This sounds interesting, I really like the name Gentry, it's original. I don't think TJ sounds very pureblood though. And you made a few errors in spelling and grammar, but a beta could fix that. It did seem a little rushed at time, you could have had more description, a lot was just dialogue. Good work.
-CaitlinAuthor's Response: TJ is just a nickname. Just wait. You'll find out his real name in around the middle of the story... promise. Report Review
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