That was very good, I like your view on Regulus and Gentry splitting up. I always did think it was a shame there wasn't a girl so yours was very good.

Author's Response: I think there should have been a girl in the middle of Sirius and Regulus. She probably would've kept the two in line a little better.
*~*Kort*~*

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Hahaha
he hasa biggerstaff for her.HAHAHA


padfoot ruless

Author's Response: Prongs owns you

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i like this chapter alot
very intresting


*BIGGERSTAFF*
lol the inside joke
hahaha

Author's Response: leave the biggerstaff alone Padfoot


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haha
nice chapter
i like it
it is sweet!
i love how she called him RABBIT
lol
this chapter rocks my socks

PADFOOT RULES ALL!



Author's Response: She calls him Rabbit alot. And Snuffles gets called a mangy mutt!

Love Ya Pads
Prongs

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HAHAHA
JAMES GOT SOME
UH OHH PADFOOT IS GONNA BE FUCKING PISSED IF HE FINDS OUT
hahahah

padfoot rules

Author's Response: Shockingly Padfoot's okay with it. IRONY!

See Ya Pads

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wow good intro i like it so far!

PADFOOT ROCKS YOUR SOCKS!!
haha

Author's Response: Prongs Loves Ya Mrs_RonaldWeasly


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This sounds interesting, I really like the name Gentry, it's original. I don't think TJ sounds very pureblood though. And you made a few errors in spelling and grammar, but a beta could fix that. It did seem a little rushed at time, you could have had more description, a lot was just dialogue. Good work.

-Caitlin

Author's Response: TJ is just a nickname. Just wait. You'll find out his real name in around the middle of the story... promise.

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