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Review #1, by simi potter waiting for harry

30th January 2010:
It was so cute and funny
loved it.

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Review #2, by someone___1 waiting for harry

16th January 2009:
awww! that seemed sirius like, and lily like, and james like, and remus like. so, very true to the characters! yayzers!

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Review #3, by cnewk waiting for harry

5th October 2008:
very cute I like it sirius is funny

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Review #4, by TheHarryPottercrazedChicks waiting for harry

4th October 2008:
That was so sweet and cute! I loved it! good, amazing job! you need to write more! *Claps and a cookie* -charly

Author's Response: = D thank you for your review i'm glad someone really likes it.Sorry but that was only a one-shot to get me past writers block.
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Review #5, by auror_snape waiting for harry

4th October 2008:
The plot was excellent, but the grammar needs some serious work. You have commas where there should be periods, and you don't even put periods in when you end a sentence. Then you need some kind of punctuation inside the quotes, either commas or periods. 7/10

Author's Response: i know my grammar sucks.thanks for telling me and thanks for your review...i'll try and fix them up

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