It was so cute and funny loved it.Author's Response: thanks for your review. Lily Times Report Review
awww! that seemed sirius like, and lily like, and james like, and remus like. so, very true to the characters! yayzers!Author's Response: Thanks. lily Times Report Review
very cute I like it sirius is funnyAuthor's Response: Thanks for your review. Lily Times Report Review
That was so sweet and cute! I loved it! good, amazing job! you need to write more! *Claps and a cookie* -charlyAuthor's Response: = D thank you for your review i'm glad someone really likes it.Sorry but that was only a one-shot to get me past writers block. Lily Times Report Review
The plot was excellent, but the grammar needs some serious work. You have commas where there should be periods, and you don't even put periods in when you end a sentence. Then you need some kind of punctuation inside the quotes, either commas or periods. 7/10Author's Response: i know my grammar sucks.thanks for telling me and thanks for your review...i'll try and fix them up Report Review
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