this pairing is so completely wrong but works oh so well!!! fantastic!Author's Response: Thank you again! :D xx Report Review
Good night that is an incredibly odd pairing. It's so bizarre that I couldn't really see it happening unless I was thinking way outside of the box. So I could definitely see how you had some trouble writing the story while trying to make it believable. So I commend you for working hard and producing a decent story.
I did spot a few spelling mistakes and wrong word choices that I unfortunately at this point in time can't seem to find anymore but I know they're there. But despite those errors it was still an interesting story to read to get you thinking out of the realm of normalcy.
Oh and nice way to tie it back into the canon story at the end there.
=^_^=Author's Response: hahaha Thank you!! Yes it is an extremely odd pairing! - Courtesy of Axjion ;) Thanks so much! I'm so glad you thought it to be ok :) This was probably the most difficult one-shot stories I have ever written so I was extremely worried about its response :P
Oooh I'll go back and correct them asap! Thanks so much letting me know :D I always do that lol
Glad it gave you something to think about and so happy you liked the ending :D Thanks for the wonderful review! Report Review
Wow. This was emotional.
I'm really impressed at how you made this unbelievable pairing so believeable. Also the way you described Bellatrix's inner battle was really good.
10/10Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm so glad that you enjoyed it :D You thought it was believable?! OMG Thank you!! I struggled with this so much so your review has made me so happy :P Thanks for taking the time to review! Report Review
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