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Review #1, by Ginny45 Hear Me Out

12th July 2010:
Hey it is RandomRed from the forums with your review.
I have never read anything written from Blaise's pov but this was interesting.
A Slytherin centered story alway makes me smile beause they are so misunderstood in my opinon but you didn't fall into the evil, ignorant cliche. :)
Pansy is so different I expected her to be whiny and annoying but she isn't she holds her own in this story and doesn't get overwhelmed by Blaise.
The best bit for me has to be the end it is just so simple but it means so much when linked with the story. It is lovely :).
If you need any more review just drop by. I'd be happy to do it from what I have read here.
xxx

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! :D

I truly appreciate your kind words and I'm so glad you liked it. Blaise is one of the minor characters that I've found I have an affection for, so I do like to write for him. :]

Thanks again for reading!

--DracoFerret11


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Review #2, by Shard Hear Me Out

18th August 2009:
Well now, that was quite interesting. Who'd have thought that Pansy could actually be human? I give it two thumbs up.

Author's Response: Thanks a bunch!

I'm so glad you liked it.

Thanks so much for reviewing. :D

I appreciate it.

--DF11


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Review #3, by rainbowstarz Hear Me Out

12th July 2009:
Awwee >.<
That was so cute!! i also love blaise, cute blaise, not badboy blaise. i leave badboy for draco ;)
Good job, loved it!

9/10 :)

Author's Response: :D

I\\\'m so glad that you liked this one!

Not many people like Blaise or Pansy, so thanks bunches for reading!

Thanks a ton for reviewing too!

I really appreciate the feedback. :D

--Emily


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Review #4, by confusedlover Hear Me Out

6th February 2009:
very lovely.

being entirely honest, i thought that you did an amazing job on this. it was not the best one-shot that i have ever read, but i must say that things really seemed to have a nice trait about them. i thought that the overall flow of this story was very productive for your writing style, but even so, i think that you could slow things down just a bit. i know that this is already pretty lengthy, but i think that if you just work a little with different perspectives and at new angles, things will easily be cleaned up that little bit that they should be. nothing was terribly distracting, but that is the only complaint that i could offer you. i thought that you honestly did a wonderful job on this. the overall message was lovely. nice job.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

I'm really excited to get such a kind review.

This was one of the stories that I was worried about after I wrote it. It was such a new perspective for me, so I was afraid that it might have turned out badly.

However, I trust your opinion. :] I'll see what I can do about the pacing, it was hard to get everything that I wanted to say out in less than a million words... >.<

Thank you so, so much for reviewing and I'm really glad that you liked the story. :D

--Emily


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Review #5, by Indigo Seas Hear Me Out

10th January 2009:
Hello! This is Indigo Seas from the forums, here with the review you requested. It's a bit late, and I apologize; Life got in the way.

I know you told me to beharsh, but I could only find a couple things that were slightly negative. I mean, really, the story was pretty much flawless. :)

OK, harsh-ness first: There were a couple of dialogue instances where you ended with a period, like this: "'...Blaise.' He said..." You should end the dialogue with a comma, and then start the sentence with a lower case letter, like this: "'...Blaise,' he said..."

Anyway... I think that was the only negative thing I can talk about. Really, it was that good.

I know you said you were concerned about the characterization of Blaise and Pansey, but I think they were both written beautifully. Pansey seems like the girl who would sneak around behind other boys' backs. I try to stay away from any fanfic involving Blaise, but I might give them another chance after this. He was written fantastically.

I loved the last line here. It really sewed your story together. :) Just thought I'd point that out.

I think that's all I can say about this... Really, it was wonderful. Thanks so much for requesting!

- rin

Author's Response: Hey, Rin!

Thanks so much for your review, I loved reading it.

I really appreciate the constructive criticism you gave, I always mess up with dialouge. >.<

I'm glad you liked my characterization, it was something that I had been stressing about since you never get much information on either Pansy or Blaise. I was worried I may have been TOO creative, haha.

Anyway, thanks so much, I really do appreciate it, this made my night. :]

--Emily


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Review #6, by long_live_luna_bellatrix Hear Me Out

21st December 2008:
Hey, that was really, really good. I loved it. Most people capture Slytherins horribly, making them seem like arrogant, heartless gits, but they're not. You did that very well.

Blaise was extremely well written- his emotions were amazing!

My only suggestion is that once Pansy accepts to be Blaise's girlfriend, they get cuddly way too fast. Holding hands is fine, but even if he had a major crush on her forever, he wouldn't immediately wrap his arms around her and all that stuff.

Otherwise, perfect! Great job!

~long_live_luna_bellatrix

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I'll definitely go back and look at the part you said you could work. I'm glad that you liked my characterization, I worked hard to perfect it. :D

--DF11


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Review #7, by Rose Aleera Hear Me Out

26th October 2008:
10/10 it' fantastic! I adore Blaise!
...it also shows a different 'face' of Pansy, like it! ;)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad that you liked it. It was definitely a different take on things that I wanted to try. I appreciate the review. --DracoFerret11

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