Aww this is really sweet. You actually made her change of heart quite plausible, which is always a hard thing to do. I thought James hugging her in the Great Hall was just about the sweetest thing ever, and I can't wait to see more of them! I love their group of friends, and how worried they all were about Lily!! That was so sweet! I am do excited to read more about them, because I have really grown to love your characters! Great job! Report Review
Wow! To be honest I don't read Lily/James that much, but I love your story! It is so amazing. I loved the whole opening scene, you set it so well. You not only showed the reader the office and scene you were imagining but also gave them the sense of smell and touch. It was really amazing. I also really like your characterization of all of the Mauraders. You seem to write them perfectly. I loved the question that Remus asked and the way you talked about them at first with the whole McGonagall incident. You were right about it being a long chapter, but I really think it was perfect to introduce the Lily/James tension as well as all the other characters. I can't wait to read more! This is really an amazing story! Report Review
I love this chapter.
but in all fairy tales i want the happily ever after depending no matter how you get there. i can't wait for the next chapter. Report Review
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