Wow, stealing from Twilight. Pathetic. Technically you deserve a zero, but it doesn't go that low.

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I like where this is going, with the impending power struggle and how the story is developing for their future. Hope you can come back and post the next chapter, will be waiting (impatiently)

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O COME ON!Write soon 10/10

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Hmmm... I don't love vampire stories, but your Blurred Lines was so good that now I read this. Care to finish it? Your writing is really good.

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Myyy dear(: you must write more! This is completly the best harrypotter/twilight crossover i've certanly read! I absolutly can't wait till the cullens arive! I'm nearly twitching with excitement! (:

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Hey, I'm german and I have a suggestion:
"Du Sheissfleck! Loretta, du hast zu mir ein dummkopf gebracht!" is grammatically incorrect, it should be "Du Scheissdreck! Loretta, du hast mir einen Dummkopf gebracht!" :)
If you would like me to tell you when there are other small errors like these, just tell me!
By the way, I like your story ;)

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This is amazing! At the beginning I didn't realise that it was a Twilight crossover, but that just makes it even better :) one of the best crossovers I've read... not that I've read many .

I'm thinking you should write more and update as soon as the queue opens again :D

Star x

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this is great so far, please update soon! 10/10

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A H H H H H H H !!!
OHHH GOD!
WRITE MORE NOW!
RIGHT NOW!
I NEED MORE!
SERIOUSLY PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE :(
HOW COULD YOU END IT LIKE THIS?!
I COULD DIE!
WHAT WILL YOU DO IF I DIE?
HUH? HUH? HUH!?
*takes some deep breaths*
This story is absolutely amazing.
I love it, so write more soon!
sam xx

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arrg he loves her :D :D :D as you can tell i am getting rather into this story :D

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i normally hate storys when they change characters this much like makeing hermione not a mudblood but i really like this story it has me griped :D 10/10 x

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Second man? No Victor Krum?
Anyway, what a twist, I wasn't expected this plot, and where is Draco? I miss him...

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It's dark as I like, hope we will see more Draco-vampire soon.

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It looks so interesting.
Great begining.

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0mg please update ASAP
please please please!!!:D
i loved it!!!
10/10:))

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oh so this means she will eventually become one of them...and draco is one of them.i like where this is going lol(:

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0hmyy this sounds very interesting lol
i like it, *moves on to next chapter*(:

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oohhhlalala a date!

Love,

:)

~aida~

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amazing!

Love,

:)

~aida~

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Love iT!

Love,

:)

~aida~

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write more!! i loved it!!

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I'm really likeing it. Haven't read to many crossover cause most of them are twilight fanatics who can't write at all, but this one is different. I think it's great and I hope you keep writing!

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when can i expect the next one?

Author's Response: when i write it. haha i got a job so now its college partying raving a job and friends. so not much time. sorry. read my other stories. i might do it this sunday though...

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I really like your writing style, it makes me laugh! This line:

"Why was he here though? Did he want to kill me? Oh. My. God. He was going to kill me."

I was cracking up haha. You're writing perspective is great because Hermione's POV is hilarious. I love reading stories that make me laugh =) And I like this plot; I'm shocked it doesn't have more reviews!

What I really like is the complete difference in Draco and Hermione. You provide a very humorous Hermione and a scary, almost serious Draco. They are very different, which some author's can't do. Great job hun!

Author's Response: thank you! and me too about the reads. my other has like 300 reviews too, i have like 40 billion reads but 25 reviews? boo.

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I love this story! I can't wait to read more!

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