jasper told hermione about very thing,

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jasper told hermione about very thing,

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Wow! What a great first chapter I had my doubt when I first started reading but you made your first chapter so excting that I can't wait to read some more. (: Great job with your first chapter and I hope you continue to update! 9/10

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Hello again, Wolfie. :D

Firstly, I've never seen a Hermione/OC before, so I'm pretty excited to see where you go with this. Jasper seems like a really interesting OC, especially since he's got that mysterious past thing going on. I'm really interested to see where you'll go from here, and how you develop his character.

The links between Dumbledore and Jasper seem really interesting too, espeically since Dumbledore sent him that owl. And I like the AU thing, it's always interesting to see how an author shapes the world to fit their plot.

I like how you started this chapter off with a bang, and got the action going right away, you did a really good job on that.

Brilliant job!
Shauna

Author's Response: I've never read a Hermione/OC before either lol. This came about kind of by accident. I was writing up ideas and it just sort of developed. Complete accident but I'm enjoying writing it.

I'm going to put a bit of talking between Harry and Jasper about Dumbledore so I needed a solid ground to work from and considering how caring Dumbledore always is (if a bit manipulative) it seemed like a good idea.

Happy that someones reading this story, not many reads as off yet, but I'm hoping that'll change.

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Wolfie

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