I'm really curious where you got the idea for Dominique's nickname. My name is actually Dominique, but everyone calls me Minnie (though I obviously spell it differently than in your story). I've never come across anyone else that does that, so finding this story got me really excited!

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well this chapter is obviously.BRILLIANT!!!
ALL YOUR CHAPTERS ARE!

seriusly this is a great story, and dominique is such a real character! You actually feel her pain, and get whats happening, my favourite story, please, please UPDATE

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well i can definitely say that it wasn't horrible! and leans much more towards brilliant. can't wait to see what happens next!!

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Yay! Another great chapter, this story is just soo great! I love the way you write, and i really like Dominique, I hope you continue with this!
cant wait for the next chapter!

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it was perfect, the confrontion was great although i'm sure it was very disturbing for mini herself. oooh! dominique and lysander are unperfect yet some how perfect, i can't explain it... keep going! looking forward to reading more!!

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i cannot believe i overlooked this chapter! i had no idea of its existence... and its brilliant i must say, even though it needs a fair bit of editing, i'd say its the best yet!!! :)

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brilliant chapter! i loved it. and very eventful too. thanks!

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I liked it, but you might want to look over it and repost. There's a good few typos and other dumb little things.

... Lysander! Or rather, Dominique! Why must you be so obtuse in your ways?

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so happy to see you're back to this again.
i love the whole idea of the story, considering no one really thinks about dominique.
ah i can't wait for something to happen with lysander and dominique! its like. right there but not yet, you know???
right, like that made any sense.
keep going. its brilliant

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well i definitely believed you managed to get that message cross! congrats!

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amazing chapter, very much enjoyed such insight into mini's feelings. sounds like she is severly depressed!! :(

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nice. i love it. i think she should have a total emotional breakdown and then Lysander should come and comfort her...hehe..but thats just me...
But, anyway, Excellent job so far! I loved it. Continue soon please!!

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I Love It! can't wait for the next chapter!

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dun dun dun. . . amazing! absoultly love it! keep up the amazing work! cant wait to see what happens next! update soon!

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What? No more chapters? You've got to update soon!

I liked that little bit where the story was following Lysander at the beginning; it was sweet!

And Rose and Scorpius? Yea!

"Yes, I really think - "

"I've been dating Scorpius Malfoy."

"- bloody hell!"

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In fact, come to think of it, she had been ignoring a lot of people these days

I like that line... And its not like this chapter was a horrible piece of filth; it was perfectly fine. I like it, too.

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I like your story so far. (The banner's wicked!) I can't wait to see who does what next, but be sure you capitalize the first letter of each piece of dialouge; it's the only grammatical error I've seen. All and all, great! :D

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Cute chapter :) Lysander's concern was very sweet! Hope you can update soon!

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Fun chapter. :) I especially enjoyed the concern Lysander showed for Mini. Glad you updated, and looking forward to reading more. :)

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Wow, this is getting very good, I really like it. I can't remember if I said this, but you're characterization of Dominique is great! I can't wait for the next chapter :3

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Wow, great start! I really like your characterization of Dominique - "Mini" is also an interesting nickname! Well, must move on..

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haha a great lead from the previous chapter, a tad confusing at times, but another wonderful chapter nonetheless! i look forward to more soon.

Author's Response: thank you very much! great to hear the feedback, thanks again and again! :)

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This was pretty good chapter but I got a little confused sometimes. But, I know the next chapters will be great.

I feel have to review for every chapter I read of every story now, because no one is reviewing my story both on here and fanfiction website

Author's Response: thank you soo much for taking the time to review and it was lovely to hear your thoughts :) i do know what you mean - it is awfully tough to accumulate reviews because not every one is willing to give them. which is why i appreciate yours so much! :) now you'e said that, i must read your stories some time, and you can be sure that i will review!
:)

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i really like it so far!!
i love mini, it was an interesting choice for you to branch off of fleur and bills kids (dont see that often), in a good way =)

cant wait to see how the plot goes.. keep writing!

Author's Response: thank you hugely! what a lovely review, i hope you continue to follow the story! thanks again!

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looks to me like things are shaping up! great chapter - looking forward to the next.

Author's Response: thanks so much for takng the time to review!! hope you continue to follow along with the story - and continue your wonderful reviews! :):):) thanks heaps!

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