Reading Reviews for The Beginning
3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by CallieWood The War

22nd March 2009:
write moreee! i want to know what else happened!

Author's Response: thanks so much and i willn
as soon as i get my internet up and running again!

 Report Review

Review #2, by SnowyHedwig The War

14th October 2008:
Wow, I really liked this chapter. So all along, they were so close to each other during the battle... I liked that you made it Blaise who killed Lucius - after all, he killed her sister, and it was most definitely a revenge of passion.

On a CC note, much better in regards to spelling and such - great job! Update soon, I'm interesting in seeing how it was exactly that Hermione and Draco kept missing each other!

Author's Response: AHHH! THis is so awesome! You have no idea how much i love you right now! Your reviews are so awesome and they make me want to jusp ans yell with joy! YOu are the coolest! thanks so much for the great review! :)

 Report Review

Review #3, by SnowyHedwig The Beginning of a New Life

14th October 2008:
I didn't think this was a boring chapter at all. It certainly set the stage, and gave me more to go with in regards to Missing. I think this will be an excellent prequel, and am looking forward to more.

On a CC note, there were several typos in this chapter, I'd suggest running spell check or re-reading your chapters before you submit them.

Update soon, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: OMG! i remameber you! You read my Missing! AH! Thanks so much for the wonderful review! I know i need to fix a couple of things, but iam so glad that i finally got a review on this story! thanks so much !you just made my day! :)

 Report Review
If this is your story and you wish to respond to reviews, please login