add more chapters i'm very angry that you abanded this storyAuthor's Response: Thanks for your review. Honestly I am very sorry I ever wrote this because I can no longer write it. I can't reread the books due to a pure out hate of the writing style and the story line. There is just no way for me to continue this. I don't mean to dis twilight. I just have no other options. I am willing to give away the plot line if they contact me. I have all the notes and plans for this. I just can't continue it myself. So if you know anyone interested I would gladly message them the plot line. Thanks once again for the review, and I will contact you if anyone ever continues this story.
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Pretty good! There were a few spelling mistakes but no matter.
I think you've got a cool plot going. I'm eager to read another chapter if you'll write it. I liked the part when the narrater asked, "Who was this Moody? And why was he so sensitive." Haha! Good one.
I really had no idea what was happening when all the wizards drew their wands when they saw Alice and Bella? Do they know what Alice is? Or were they about to erase their memories or something? I don't know. If you could explain that to me that'd be great.
Also there were some sentences that were kind of repetative (sorry I know that's spelt wrong). Like you said Bella was excited about Hermione coming twice. And when Hermione was upset with Ron she said shut up a bit too many times. Try to use some different wording to make it more interesting. Other than that great!
One last thing. What's up with the whole Edward is Bella's ex-boyfriend. Is it like in New Moon or what? Because Alice leaves as well in New Moon. I didn't really understand that. Another thing you'll have to inform me on I guess!
Oh, and about your author's note, I think you should continue writing this story even if you don't think 'it's good enough' I can understand if you don't want to put time and effort into writing a story that won't get much publicity, but if you enjoy writing just write it! Lol
Clair Clementine ; ]
P.S. Maybe you could check out my twilight/HP crossover somtime? Oh, and you know you did well on this story when you get a Fantabulistical job from me! I only give those to really great stories like yours. LolAuthor's Response: lol. Ah another thing to brighten my day =D especially since you reviewed on my Birthday =)! I'm sooo glad you liked it. I am going to continue it; I just have to figure it out with my friend. It's getting really hard. Sorry for the mistakes. They're hard to keep track of when it has two different writing styles, but I'll try to work on it. I am going to continue it. To answer your first question: They see bella hug Hermione but think it is an attack so they pull out their wands. Second question: Ummm I don't really know. I just felt like starting it a little dramatic by making them x's. I also wanted to kind of miss up the character pairs to cross the stories even more. Yea just a little more fun for me.
I'm glad you like it. Thanx for the review. Anymore questions just ask me.
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I love it. The character's personalities are just how they are in the books. it's almost as if Stephenie Meyer and J.K. Rowling wrote this together. I REALLY hope you continue writing this with your friends!Can't wait to read more.Author's Response: Thanx Ellie. Some how I think I know you, but I'm not sure. You do remind me of one of my friends though. Thanx I'm glad you liked it. The characters' personalities better be just like they really are. Between having a harry Potter fanatic and a Twilight Fanatic working on it, they shouldn't be off in the least! Thanx We will if It works out. Thanx for the review. Report Review
HOW THE HELL DID U SAY THAT BELLA AND EDWARD BROKE UP. THEM BEING TOGETHER IS THE BEST THING
IF U WRITE MORE IM NOT READING THIS SHITAuthor's Response: Srry i can't please everyone, and if you stop reading how will you ever know if they get back together???
I hope you won't stop reading bcuz of a lil' changing in the crossover story i am writing.
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Wow, awesome start, I really like it, so far! I must say that I've a soft spot for HP/Twilight crossovers, so I was really happy when I stumbled over this one, lol!
The plot seems very interesting and the character description is great, as well as the interaction between them! And the fic is quite well written too!
Naturally, I wonder what the pairings are going to be?!
I really hope you will write more, because I'd love to read more, so please do and update soon...Author's Response: LOL I think you are the first one to comment on this story which i'm very happy u did bcuz if no one did i was just going to delete it. Oh the pairings are going to be quite fun. The whole story is set we just have to write it. I hope you and others enjoy it. I'm glad you liked it. The hardest part is where 2 other ppl are writing it with me, and one does not attend skool with me anymore so it'll be hard. I do hope to have chapter 2 up soon though. Thanx for the review.
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