{reviewid: 2716593, reviewer: 'fanfiction'}
6th July 2012:
was it ok? it was amazing i liked it a lot and you did good
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{reviewid: 2558162, reviewer: 'anonie'}
1st August 2011:
It was better than ok, it was sweet :)
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{reviewid: 2514077, reviewer: 'Miss%20Haggan'}
26th April 2011:
it was good, just not long enough. I liked the story being in Hermione's POV but it was just not detailed and long enough for me.
7/10
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{reviewid: 2491756, reviewer: 'terry'}
10th March 2011:
This story is really good. It is better than ok.
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{reviewid: 2418805, reviewer: 'pirette08'}
1st October 2010:
Lovely! I always thought it was so unrealistic that Nothing happened beween them when Ron left. I was even more shocked that they never even disccussed the "You choose him" comment. I mean really? I had to write about this scene as well so I love to see other's also get inspiration from that chapter. I really loved it, the descriptions and everything was skillfully written!
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{reviewid: 2255347, reviewer: 'American%20Ginny'}
17th November 2009:
it was better than ok. It was good. I loved it. It could've used a little more depth like description and more emotion, but over all it was good.
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{reviewid: 2236091, reviewer: 'kahing'}
12th October 2009:
Ahh, wished this could have happened in the books. Hermione and Harry are meant for each other!
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{reviewid: 2201784, reviewer: 'xCailinNollaigx'}
23rd August 2009:
I thought that was a wonderful alternative to what happened in DH. Oh, how I wish this is what really happened.
I love the whole story -- circling it around those words was clever, and I loved when Hermione realised she had chosen Harry. It was written well.
Only part I didn't like was the end, it was rather ... abrupt. No, not abrupt, more.. descriptionless. It's okay though, I still love the fic!haha
The descriptions between Harry and Hermione were good, too. How you explained the 'feeling' and everything.
I loved it!
xCNx
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{reviewid: 2195921, reviewer: 'cheeky_squirrel'}
16th August 2009:
What horrible author skills? This was beautiful: short, sweet, and the way it SHOULD have happened in the books! Well done :)
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{reviewid: 2194087, reviewer: 'Meg_'}
15th August 2009:
Loved it. And also loved the banners. They were all great. I like it how it you didn't make it cheesy or obvious. I also feel like you ended it at the right time. Sometimes a one shot just needs to be a one shot and I feel like there are people that try to open things up a lot. I don't know. I just enjoyed the shortness of it all. It was a great snippet. I definitely think you should be writing more. Put yourself out there.
~Meg
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{reviewid: 2191433, reviewer: 'Ella'}
12th August 2009:
Short but beautiful.
Well done.
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{reviewid: 2190439, reviewer: 'something%20random'}
11th August 2009:
A nice sweet chapter. I think it should've happened in the book like this.
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{reviewid: 2189842, reviewer: 'DontBeSilly'}
10th August 2009:
I really liked this one-shot. It was short, sweet, and well done. I'm adding it to my favorites!
:)
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{reviewid: 2189673, reviewer: 'emma'}
10th August 2009:
great start and is quite intertaining
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{reviewid: 2189644, reviewer: 'Jami'}
10th August 2009:
It was kind of short but that's a good thing. If you made it any longer Hermione would just keep wallowing in denial over and over again.
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{reviewid: 2189618, reviewer: 'Dmali'}
10th August 2009:
very quick but good. id love an expansion...go on dont b shy. hermione's thoughts were very real
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{reviewid: 2189508, reviewer: 'mystichpgirl'}
10th August 2009:
aw. it was more than okay! It was a perfect ending! I truly wish that that would've happened in the Deathly Hallows instead of Rowling pairing Ginny with Harry. I love Ron and Hermione together as well, but Harry and Hermione are better suited. 10/10!!!
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{reviewid: 2189458, reviewer: 'Timechild'}
10th August 2009:
Cute story, but I am not sure how the others would have found Harry and Hermione as they had hidden the tent from everybody. Little detail there.
Nicely written anyway
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{reviewid: 2189382, reviewer: 'confusedlover'}
10th August 2009:
very lovely.
this was a cute and realistic one-shot. great job, dear.
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{reviewid: 2165812, reviewer: 'Sufflesgirl327'}
18th July 2009:
OMG u should continue!!! I WANT MORE!
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{reviewid: 2133175, reviewer: 'Harrypotterfanforever'}
3rd June 2009:
Ok? It was great! There was no action and not much talking, but you still kept the readers full attention. Fantastic Job!
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{reviewid: 2040059, reviewer: 'Professor%20of%20Muggle%20Studies'}
24th January 2009:
Well written. Good flow and well tied in with JKR's version.
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{reviewid: 1983243, reviewer: 'ActingwithStyle'}
8th November 2008:
awe that was sweet, good one-shot, little short but still worth the read :)
keep up the good work!
8/10
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{reviewid: 1982122, reviewer: 'cedric_diggorys_girl'}
6th November 2008:
wow, thats all i can say.
10/10
Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you dear.
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{reviewid: 1977139, reviewer: 'Krystle%20Lynne'}
30th October 2008:
I really liked it, you showed the battle that was going on inside her head. I would love to see a sequel from Harry's point of view, just to see what he thought about a) Ron leaving and b) his feelings towards Hermione.
~Krystle Lynne~
Author's Response: Wow, thanks! A sequel? Well, It's a possibility. Thanks for reviewing. :)
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