ahh so tragic!!
after having read this and your sequel i am desperate for an insight into rose's pov. i would love to see how you would portray her conflict - how does she truly feel about scorpius?? how much does she need him and how much does she KNOW she needs him?
i love your writing, please don't stop!! xx 10/10

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I personally loved everything about his one shot.
I'm speechless, it's perfect
10/10

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kick ass song, man. great choice for a fic!

but personally, i don't think you have to really corolate the lyrics perfectly with the story, which is what it seemed like you were trying to do.

overall, i enjoyed it :]

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love it
sad how she has no clue shes killing this way

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm really glad this came across so well I usually write then rewrite then rewrite somemore before I like something but this only took one shot to write so that makes me happy. =)

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Wow, I really liked this!
Sequel?

Author's Response: I am going to have to think about a sequel now which was not what I intended but I am intrigued with the idea. it will be completely different from my other story but much more fun to write I think

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i really loved this story.
i'm sure alot of people would agree when i say i'd love to see a sequel.

Author's Response: Wow thanks I hadn't even thought about that but I will now, it may take awhile. I'm graduating in december so things are getting busy

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Really good one shot and totaly different to what i've read before, but it also makes a lot of sense that it could be like that between them. As his father would have probably been made an outcast after his part in the war, that he would be frowned upon if he got with the saviours, friends daughter.

awesome!! jenx (10/10)

Author's Response: Thanks, I like the aspect of that relationship between them much more than my other scorose...

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