This was really sweet and I loved the interaction between Albus and Selina - great characterisation! :)

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this story was really good. also i like the way you made the ending similar to what happens to ginny and harry at the end of the seventh book.

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oh how I love the next generation :). Albus's character was different than I expected (I didn't expect him to be so confident; it was almost James Potterish if you know what I mean), but as JK never set down much of a character for him, you were totally right in doing it. I liked Selina's character, but not her name (please don't take it the wrong way. I cringe whenever I hear the name Selina because a certain Disney Channel star makes me mad). The ending was a bit cheesy, but since most of the population here are girls, it was fine.

8/10

Author's Response: Haha, yeah, I was just sort of winging it with Albus, and since Selina was sort of shy and timid, I figured a strong Albus would be better. =) I actually didn't pick the name Selina; I did this story for a challenge, so I was given the name. =P But thank you for agreeing to review this! It was much appreciated!

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aww... cutecutecutecutecute. nice job. it was really heartwarming. :D

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Aww, that was so cute :)
I loved it.

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ahh that was so cute. i like it alot =]

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