This was amazing! I loved it! It really shoulda happened like this in the HP books! Brilliantness radiates from every word! Report Review
Really like it, glad to know Ron and Hermoine worked things out!!Author's Response: Aww, thanks! I'm happy you like it! Report Review
Living proof that hope reigns eternal. I absolutely love this story--you have captured the chemistry between Ron and Hermione as only the imagination can do effectively. I am enchanted. Well done.Author's Response: Wow! I am ECSTATIC that I've enchanted you! That may be a first for me, I am so pleased you liked it. Thanks for saying so! XD. Report Review
Definately I enjoyed the part of the fight between Ron and Hermione!!!lol^_^
10/10Author's Response: *hehe* Thank you!! Report Review
AW! That was adorable and I loved it. I seriously couldn't stop smiling! Great job!
~MichelleAuthor's Response: I'm so glad! Thanks for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Report Review
A very good Ron/Hermione one-shot :) You did a good job.
Spelling and grammar is very good. No big mistakes, I think. You wrote a nice length to your story, so that's all good. And the pace wasn't bad. Slightly rushed in the middle, but it was okay.
Characterization of Ron and Hermione was also very good. It would be just like them to be arguing and then suddenly be kissing each other. So I enjoyed reading that part.
I think you could have been a bit more descriptive in this, but apart from that I have no complaint.
I liked this story a lot. It was very good :)
9/10Author's Response: Thanks so much, I appreciate it! Report Review
This was a good one shot. I enjoyed the descriptions and characterizations. Great job!Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! Report Review
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