“Some find me very loveable,” he insisted.
She nearly choked. He was looking positively jolly now. “Your mother, perhaps,” she covered quickly, “and those in possession of minimal wit.”
BEST. COMEBACK. EVER. Seriously, I think I'm a bit in love with you. I've never read Godric/Rowena before, but I really liked this, and I think you got the characters really well. Beautiful writing! Report Review
LostMaebllshire spins a pleasant tale about how Godric Gryffindor and Rowena Ravenclaw meet. “Supplementary Falsehoods to a First Impression” is a great way to explain the introduction: wordy; after that, though, the interaction between the two is intriguing. The resulting yarn is cheery and, with a little bit of time and the correct tools, could be a heartwarming fabric. (6/10)Author's Response: I'm glad you seemed to enjoy it, though am sorry the story itself wasn't good enough for you. Report Review
As a whole-hearted Pride and Prejudice lover (and anything Jane Austen, to be precise), this really tugged at my heart. Very original, great characterization, and it left me satisfied, but wanting more. Your style is lovely, and little details were very fitting. With a few word choice changes here and there, this would be perfect! I set out tonight looking to find q witty founders fic, as I've never read the era before, and I found it in yours. (After some previously unsuccessful reads.) can't wait to read more from you! Off to bed with a smile on my face. (: Report Review
I really liked this story, especially the characters. The writing and vocab was really really good and very well written!Author's Response: Thank you very much! :) Report Review
I really liked it! Not the most exciting story but interesting and very well written. Good job! Keep writing! :7)Author's Response: Thank you. :) I figured I'd already written a somewhat action-intensive Godric/Rowena story, so it was about time I did one wherein the only action occurred between Godric and Rowena themselves. Report Review
How sweet. It's a wonderful take on Godric and Rowena's relationship. An added bonus, you are an excellent writer.
It would be amazing if you decided to turn this into a story of the Four Founders. I would certainly read and review. Just a thought. (:Author's Response: Thank you! If I had the patience, I would probably write a longer Founders story, but alas, I don't. I'm glad you enjoyed this, though! :) Report Review
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