Poor Harry, you put him through so much. The Weasleys, Teddy, the Dursleys, and Azkaban prisoners all in one chapter! Oh well, what's life without drama? Report Review
I love the handwriting idea, it's really unique! So far all of your characters are acting quite realistically too! I knew there was a reason I love your story so much, I hate it when the characters are all out of character. Report Review
Okay, I've read this story through a few times already, and I love it to pieces. So, as a thank-you for writing such a wonderful story, I'm going to go through and review for you!
I also love the shower & a girlfriend line, I didn't notice it on my first read but it had me laughing when I did discover it. Next chapter, here I come! Maybe I'll find some other great lines :) Report Review
I have been STARVING for some good harry potter fanfiction since Deathly Hollows, and so far ive read some decent stuff but this was fantastic, i have to say ive tried to read some of your other stuff but wasnt able to become addicted like i was to this. I understand from reading the other reviews that you feel like a sequel to this would ruin the plot, but i would love to see some other post DH stories from you! great job!Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! Umm, yeah, sorry about the other stuff -- I probably should put a disclaimer on them that says something along the lines of "I wrote this when I was fourteen and stupid", or "I only keep these online because I lost the original files and every now and then, I like to look at them so I can see how I do NOT want to write ever again". (I don't really like them, either. I do think they're endlessly amusing when I'm in a particularly self-deprecating mood, though.) And yeah, I don't think there ever will be a sequel to this story, but I've been working on something else equally disturbed. I may be posting that in the future, but I make no promises. Thank you again for the review! -Alisa Report Review
Aw, great ending!
I loved this story! It had the right amount of drama and romance and action and adventure! It was fantastic!Author's Response: Thank you! -A Report Review
well done it is really great story and i love that finally harry began to understand why ginny did all of that because i really was so anger because he always yell at her and she donn deserve that because she did all of that for him Report Review
why the hell did everyone treat ginny like that!!! she did all of that only to save him. her life wasn't that perfect too she was live in the hell. ofcourse innocent people donn deserve to die but she had no choice she can't also chose harry or one of her family to die why they can't understand her all harry do is screaming on her in all the story and donn try to understand how much she love him!!. and there is no one try to understand her at all :@Author's Response: It really sucks to be her, right? Thanks for the review. -A Report Review
Not to bad kinda liked itAuthor's Response: Thank you. Report Review
I just finished reading this story and I just wanted to say that it was amazing! I have found that many harry and ginny stories either don't have a good plot or are too AU to believably fit in with canon. This is definitely one of the best stories that I have read here. You have written a story with an excellent plot that hooked me-- there was suspense, mystery, action, and just enough romance. I feel that this story could have legitimately happend in the stories and it was very creative to have someone who had just been affected by the great battle to actually be behind it.
The best thing about your story was that I felt you added something to Harry and Ginny's relationship and put an interesting spin on it. Most stories that I have read basically just have them turning into soul mates, but I thought that this was an interesting way to take it. Basically, I loved the plot. :)
I am glad that you don't plan on writing a prequel or a sequel. But I do think you should write some more! It was well written and I would love to read more from you!Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it. I've noticed the soul mate thing, too -- actually, that was one of the things that gave me the inspiration to write this. I just wanted to read something a little different, and since I couldn't really find what I was looking for, I decided to write it myself. I'll let you decide whether I succeeded or not. Thank you again for the review and the compliments; you've made my day! -A Report Review
Ahhh this is so good!! Your writing is so eloquent and the story line is really clever! Can't wait to keep reading!! I really want harry and ginny to get back togetherAuthor's Response: Thank you! -A Report Review
Great Story... ive been reading quit alot of post- BOH fanfiction and this has got to be one of the best... and many of them were about harry trying to fight off remaining de's but i love the ideas off muggle borns or victims of war forming a dangerous retaliation group... very creativeAuthor's Response: Thank you! -A Report Review
Prequel AND Sequel! Pleeaassseee!! It was really good even though i didnt like the way you changed harry's character and the weasley's were not on character eitherAuthor's Response: I'm sorry, but I don't think I'm going to write a prequel, or a sequel for that matter -- I wouldn't have a decent plot, and I hear that's an important part of a story. I'm glad you liked this, though. Thank you for the review! -A Report Review
great great story! The anticipation to find out what would happen next was amazing.Author's Response: Thank you! -A Report Review
Really good story. Really, really, really good. It cut into my sleep hours because I couldn't stop reading it.
It's very high in my list of favorite HP fanfics. Please keep writing stuff; you're really good.
And no, it doesn't need a sequel - you finished on just the right note.Author's Response: Thank you! I seem to have managed to sabotage quite a few people's sleep. Oops... -A Report Review
this is the best freakin story everAuthor's Response: Thank you! -A Report Review
ugh! why did it have to end!!! i mean we all know she's going to say yes, but after all you put me through i don't even get to see the proposal? great storyAuthor's Response: I know, I know, writing the proposal was in my original plans, but then I had a lot of trouble writing the whole epilogue and it turned out that way. I'm sorry! Thank you for all the reviews. -Alisa Report Review
omg! this is sooo crazy!! so many things and no one is getting anywhere! they are going around in circles!!Author's Response: I know, considering the last few chapters happen in a span of a few hours, the wordcount for the day of the finale is huge. Looking back on it now, there are a little too much scenes of the nothing's-happening-here-but-I-wrote-it-anyway. Oh well, can't do a thing about it now... Report Review
when harry said, oh course it's all in your head, but why would that mean it's not real, i started crying, the whole convo with george...beautiful and sad, dumbledore really alway knew the right thing to say. this story is incredibleAuthor's Response: Awww, I know I should have attached a Kleenex-warning to some parts... Report Review
omg i knew it! i had a hunch this was going to be her reason! amazingly good 10/10Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
that memory of Harry so happy after his date with Ginny was so sweet! it was amazong and yet sooo sad amazing chapterAuthor's Response: Thank you! I was going for that sweet-sad-thing, it's good to know I at least somewhat succeeded in it... Report Review
Oh my gosh! Perfect ending. Just wondering, are you going to write a sequel? or have you already started and i didn't check?Author's Response: Thank you! Nope, there won't be a sequel. Or, okay, there may be a one-shot of Harry's proposal but nothing more than that. -A Report Review
i just wanted to say that i thought you're story was amazing. seriously. so much thought and detail put into it, and the storyline was elaborate and so well planned out. you must have worked on this FOREVER. and it paid off. it's an amazing story. a little... twisted and disturbing sometimes... but still amazing. i like that it shows a darker side to everything. it shows how hard it was for everyone after the final battle to pick up with their lives again. that part of it is very realistic, and very well done. it's an excellent story. i loved it.Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, it did take me a while... mostly just to type up the chapters, though. And I'll be the first to say it's more than a little disturbing! I'm glad you liked it. -A Report Review
this story can't get any more depressing! with Harry and the Weasley's not speaking, Harry's life lacking of personality, the reminder of Sirius, dumbledore...Ginny and him not being together...its so sad i've almost started crying a few times!! but its sooo good you keep realing my inAuthor's Response: Oh, it can get worse, and it will! Perhaps I should've added a Kleenex-warning somewhere. Thank you for the review! -A Report Review
Great ending to a great story. I was worried for a while that there wouldn't be any closure, but after this, I was thoroughly happy.
I would have loved for this to go on for forever, but with every good story, there comes an ending, and I think you wrapped it up beautifully.Author's Response: I know, I was beginning to doubt myself, too. I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and thank you again for reviewing. -A Report Review
Tulihan se sielta, hetken aikaa sai odotella, ja aloin jo miettimaan oletko unohtanut koko asian. Mutta etpa ollut.
Palaute tiivistettyna: Loistava tarina sai loistavan epilogin. Pienta puurnaamista toki loytyy. En tieda johtuuko vain siita, etten ole tarinan vanhempia osia vahaan aikaan lukenut vai mista, mutta jotenkin hahmoihin ei paassyt aivan niin hyvin sisalle, kuin aikaisemmin. Tunnetilat eivat ilmenneet aivan yhta hyvin, etenkaan dialogissa, joka oli ja on yksi vahvuuksistasi (toinen ehdoton on tunnelman ja jannityksen luonti ja yllapito). Toki kaikki tama puurnaaminen ja hahmojen jaaminen aienpaa pinnallisemmiksi voi johtua siita, etta malttamattomana luin uusimman kappaleen yolla, silmat ristissa 4h younien jalkeen.
Mutta kaiken kaikkiaan kympin arvoista tavaraa. Ja toive vastaisuuden varalle, jos (ja toivon mukaan kun) jatkossa kirjoittelet lisaa turinoita; pysy kaanonissa (en vain jaksa lukea ginny/draco suhteista jne.). Jos nain teet on sinulla ainakin yksi varma lukija ;)
Kiitan ja kumarran loistavasta lukunautinnosta 14 kappaleen verran. (Ja saamari on hankalaa kirjoittaa ilman viimeisia aakkosia, ja viela muistaa se kirjoittaessa)Author's Response: Joo, sen piti olla joskus lokakuussa valmis (niitten syksyn yo-kirjotusten jalkeen) mutta sitten tulikin selkaleikkaus ja muuta mukavaa niin pikkusen kesti. En unohtanu kuitenkaan! Ja kun on ollut sellanen 2kk tauko kirjottamisesta niin tarinaan palaaminen ei ihan helposti onnistu, huomasin itekkin kirjottaessa kaikki noi mista puhuit (ja sensuroin about 35 ekaa versioo). Kiitos taas palautteesta, varsinki suomeks sita on tosi kiva saada (vaikka vastaaminen on turhauttavaa ilman niita viimisia kirjaimia...) Niin, ja ei tarvi pelata etta alkaisin ikina kirjotella mitaan muuta kuin harry/ginny-juttuja! Report Review
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