23 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Saffiecat911 Meet Severus

9th May 2009:
Another good story, update plz as soon as you can!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! And I'll try ;]

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Review #2, by sexi_bottle_tops Meet Severus

26th March 2009:
Two words : Love it!
I've just started reading it and I couldn't be bothered to reveiw the next chapter cos I wanted to know what happened!

XxX

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you liked it!

-Hp Fanatic


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Review #3, by MRss_TOmm_FELTOnn Meet Severus

11th January 2009:
aww poor sevy :((
thats sadd

Author's Response: LOL Ohh Severus... >.

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Review #4, by MRss_TOmm_FELTOnn Meet Alex

11th January 2009:
aww thats so sweet!!!
i love it
!!!

Author's Response: Good I'm glad :}

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Review #5, by MRss_TOmm_FELTOnn Meet James

11th January 2009:
yayy
hah i really like that story though i think ive said that :P
its really good :))

Author's Response: LOL Thank youuu

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Review #6, by MRss_TOmm_FELTOnn Meet Lily

11th January 2009:
:)
so i devised a plan. do a paragraph in between chapters.
i really liked this one. but whos liz?

Author's Response: She's a 3rd year who's on the Quidditch Team. :)

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Review #7, by MRss_TOmm_FELTOnn Meet Sirius

11th January 2009:
so good :) ahh i should be doing my english project...instead im reading this...and its sooo much better

Author's Response: LOL well, I would hope so!! :]

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Review #8, by MRss_TOmm_FELTOnn Kallie

11th January 2009:
i love it :)
and i love how your charectors have unique names in like every story :))

Author's Response: Yeah, I don't like common names all that much ;)

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Review #9, by Lori Meet Alex

23rd November 2008:
Oh my god! How saddd. Poor Sirius and Kallie! I'm glad that she's not biased against remus, that would be even sadder. and uh oh aout sev and lily- hopefully you'll be telling more about that too, hm?

Author's Response: In good time, my dear. Good time ;] Thanks for reviewing!

-Hp Fanatic


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Review #10, by Lori Meet Lily

23rd November 2008:
damn Kallies a bitch! lol oh well. anger management problems, every1 has them. i really like this story, it's cutee. love sirius black

Author's Response: lmfao. Thank you. Love Sirius Black myself ;] Thanks for the review

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Review #11, by Lori Meet Sirius

23rd November 2008:
omg, i love how Sirius's middle name is Octavius and how he has tons of detentions and injuries. haha i hope you delve deeper into that, that should be interesting. and the ending was cute too. i guess my questoin last chapter was answered this chapter :)

Author's Response: LOl Yes, I like that too. He's a little rascal ;] And yes, haha it was. Thanks for the review!

-Hp Fanatic


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Review #12, by Lori Kallie

23rd November 2008:
Aww. That's really sad, her mum was killed by a chimaera. I like how in the beginning there's that thing that tells you about her, that's cute. will you do that with all the chapters?

Author's Response: Yes, I will be- not all of them, but when an important character arises, they'll have their own record. Thanks for the review!

-Hp Fanatic


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Review #13, by ^&*() Kallie

23rd November 2008:
uh ohh. sirius black, a tutor? is he mental? haha but he most be smart if he's going to be a tutor. so i'll just have to keep reading to find outt ;]

Author's Response: lol Dumbledore is a little mental, yes. But it's for a good reason ;] Thanks for reading and reviewing !

-Hp Fanatic


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Review #14, by LuneyLovegoodRocks Kallie

23rd November 2008:
cute story so far. i'm goonna read the rest.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!

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Review #15, by AlisonKeeeeeeegen Meet Alex

17th November 2008:
what a bitch! hate alex right now, butlove her name. my cousins name is actually alexandrina, where did you find it?

Author's Response: haha yeah i know. i found it on a website, actually where i found kallie's name. i really like celebrityeseque and unique names. got anymore i could use?? :D Thanks for reviewing!

-Hp Fanatic


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Review #16, by Kally Meet James

18th October 2008:
Yayyy! Kallie's on the quidditch tema! that's so cool, we're so alike- i'm on a sports team too.

you have a new story? i'm going to check that out too! i really like your writing style. your write really well. i'm going to review your story, don't worry! =)

Kally

Author's Response: Aww that is cool- what sport do you play?

Yes, I have a new story! It's called Mirrors, and if you could review that one, that would be amazing! I'd love you forever and thanks so much for the compliment about my writing- I personally think I suck =[ But that makes me feel really good, so thanks again!

-Hp Fanatic


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Review #17, by Kally Meet Lily

18th October 2008:
woww. they're all reall y friendly like, ya kno? i wonder how that happened... i'm sure it 'll come out. i'll be patiently waiting!! great chapterr!

Kally

Author's Response: Do you mean the Marauders and Lily? Yes, that will come out...either in this chapter in queue or the next one, I cannot remember. But thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you like this story!!

-Hp Fanatic


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Review #18, by Kally Meet Sirius

18th October 2008:
wow. your chapters ar eshort, no offense. =[ but everyone likes really long chapters!! will you make them longer? anyway, they kind of remind me of vignettes... and i really like sirius's character. he's so...sirius. all the time. =) lol. gonna keep readinggg.

Kally

Author's Response: Yesss, I have a chapter in queue right now that is 5 times the usual length- that's 5 chapters into one. Are you proud?? Hahaa. And yeah, they kind of are like vignettes. I love that word ^.^ Thanks for reviewing Kally =)

-Hp Fanatic


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Review #19, by Kally Kallie

18th October 2008:
oh my gawd. that's my name!! that's so cool- my name is Kalantha Michelle Thomas, but I can't believe your using my first namee! WOwww. I thought no one knew about my name or even thought that it WAS a name. I thought it was one of a kind. Wowww. I really like it. Kallie is my nick name too, cept I spell it Kally. I really like your Kallie though, though we look nothing alike. i've got red hair and green eyes, kind like lily, but no where near as pretty as she's supposed to be. That's soo cool. I'm defintely going to be reading this storyy!!

Kally

Author's Response: Oh, wow! That's really cool- I personally think your name is prettier than my Kallie's. Kalantha Michelle is verrry gorgeous =) Thanks for reviewing my story, it makes it seem sort of real =) But hopefully what goes on in Kallie's life is nothing like your life. That would be just sad =[ But again, thanks for reviewing Miss Kally =)

-Hp Fanatic


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Review #20, by Haley Meet James

12th October 2008:
hahaa poor james he was so frustrated. but kallie saves the day, supergirll. and i'm going to go review Mirrors just for fun. you seem like a good writer, so what's the harm in checking? good job and please update with longer chapters =)

Author's Response: [gasp] Thank you so much! Yes, Kallie is supergirl! and Superbitch, like that Christina Aguilera song. Haha, I have that stuck in my head. Thanks for reviewing!

-Hp Fanatic


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Review #21, by Haley Meet Lily

12th October 2008:
aw. i wonder what the letter really said. and i like kallie's temper for some reason. like an adrenaline rush of sorts =) and i liked the ending, it was cute. but the chapters are so short! please make them longer!

Author's Response: Aww thanks! Hahaa I loove Kallie && her temper heehee. That's me without peanut butter ^.- The chapters get longer, I promise! the first few are short, but hang tight, okay?

-Hp Fanatic


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Review #22, by Haley Meet Sirius

12th October 2008:
i love sirius

Author's Response: Hahaa me too. He's so cute! =)

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Review #23, by Haley Kallie

12th October 2008:
i like your banner. is that kerli? i think so. i like kallie's character too. a little short, i hope that's not a habit. that would be suckish. good job overall though.

Author's Response: Yes, that is Kerli on my banner, I made it =) I'm glad you liked the story, and yes, the first few chapters are short, I'm sorry =/ And thanks for reviewing!

-Hp Fanatic


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