Hey I really like your story! keep it up!

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It's pretty good, but you we re a bit inconsistent when it comes to passwords. also why abandon it??!! I like it, particularly the portal that'll take you wherever you want to go.

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that was really good. I said that already though.

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that was good.

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Brill story i think its great!! Update soon

Author's Response: why thank you!

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You should really consider continuing this story. it's really good. i enjoyed reading the 7 chapters of it.

Author's Response: thanks! I've been trying, but you know how life is.......

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Wow that chappy had to be one of the best!!! the poem suited the nick perfectly and I wish i could write poems like JKR!!! LOL!!! anyways please please please update a.s.a.p and this is a definate 10 and is soo going in my faves!!! great fic keep it up behind ya 100% mini JKR!!! luv wired2damoonXxX:) or Lynz if ya wanna!

Author's Response: once again.....i really have checked and i'm not on there....smooth. and i doubt mini - i'm probably as tall as her

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cool excellent chapter keep it up!!! behind ya 100% luv wired2damoonXXX:) on to the next one!!!!

Author's Response: and on..and on.....

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GO LILY!!!! you keep sirius in check!!!! ha ha girls rule boys druel!!! LOL!!! sorry... got a bit carried away there!!! anyways keep up the excelllent writing behind ya 100% 10!!! luv wired2damoonXxX:)

Author's Response: d-r-o-o-l

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Humm.... planing against a plan!! interesting!!! i love it!!!! on to the next chappy!!! keep up the brilliant writing well done 10!!! luv wired2damoonXxX:)

Author's Response: seriously (no pun intended) no one can love a story this much because a) i am not the greatest writer blah blah blah and b) it's not my best story that i've posted

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Oh... i wonder... what could our devilish boys be up to? well you know don't you!!!! ha ha this is sooo going in my faves!!! this fic rocks!!! keep up the good work!!! luv wired2damoonXxX:)

Author's Response: suuuuuuure it is...i checked and it's not

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Hi!!! Me again (as promised) well, i loved this chappy just as much as the 1st maybe more!!! i thought the swiming pool scene was cute but cheeky! my friends did that to me before except i was in a boat... anyways enough bout that!!! that chappy rocked!!! keep up the excellent writing behind ya 100% luv wired2damoonXxX:)

Author's Response: thanks....

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Hi!!! This is sooo fun!!! I love the idea of Lily trapped for 2 weeks hee hee!!! well off to read the next chapter and i'm gonna review every chapter!!! PROMISE!!! THIS FIC ROCKS!!!! keep up the good writing behind ya 100% luv wired2damoonxXx:)

Author's Response: wtf? are you insane? NO ONE likes my stories that much

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all in all a good story, but it's not over is it?! LOVE the map part. But couldn't she remember the password to reveal it? Oh well. I'll start your 'nerezza' one

Author's Response: she doesn't know about the map yet so she don't know the password

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I FORGOT ABOUT THAT LAST PART. NOT FUNNY!!!!!! Oh well, guess it's my punishment for reading it 6 months after you wrote it...btw, dumbledore was transfiguration teacher when tom riddle was in school, which is like 30 years previous to when this story takes place...wouldn't he be head master by now? Just thinking...good job

Author's Response: exactly...you dont read for a long time, you get punished (for anyone else who is reading this review i know this person very well and i talk to her almost everyday)

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pretty good. except if i saw the animals i had been petting a second earlier were really the most annoying boys in the school, i would NOT start deducing how their nicknames relate to their animagi forms...i would be in RAGE!!!

Author's Response: too bad for you

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kinda interesting at the end, considering that she's stroking sirius and james!!! otherwise good

Author's Response: that sounds really wrong...yeah

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not quite as good as the first two, but still amusing...will continue

Author's Response: *sticks tongue out*

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good. are u going to have remus fall in love w/ lily, too? ok ok, i'll read on p.s. liked the part about dumbledore at the pool

Author's Response: no you dumb blonde that isnt how the story goes

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ok, i finally read it. maybe i already read this one a while ago, i don't remember... anyway, very good. i will read the next chapter now (said in zombie voice)

Author's Response: you are not a zombie, but a mooseses

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Wow, that was very good! Just started to read and just now finished. You need to update soon!

Author's Response: thanks for reviewing!

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I really enjoyed this story, because I found the characters were really believable and it totally reminds me of how young people act. I love how Lily is so reprimanding. She is just like Hermione. Yay. I liked your song too!

Author's Response: thanks!

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I loved the Sorting Hat song! It was great! I'm glad that they're finally at Hogwarts. It's good so far, and I'm curious where you're going to take it... cheers!

Author's Response: er...it was from the goblet of fire (i mentioned that in the story) but thanks anyway!

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How is it that Remus just transforms back into a person whenever he wants to? I don't mean to be critical here, I'm really just asking... I'm starting to get a little confused again as to the characters...

Author's Response: remus is a werewolf...he can't change voluntarily into/out of that form. but, he is also an animagus, in the form of a phoenix...and he can change voluntarily

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Ok, your focus came back here. You wrote Lily really well in this chapter, and I enjoyed reading about how terrible she looked when she woke up...lol. Going on...

Author's Response: *bows* thanks!

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