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Review #1, by Gutterflower

12th February 2009:

His speech was wonderful. I really thought it was beautiful. There were a couple of grammar mistakes in the main body of the story, but nothing serious, it just made the flow of the writing a bit jumpy in places. Other than that, there was nothing wrong at all. I loved it. :)

Author's Response: Thank you for telling me.
And thank you for reading.

I always loved that one shot.
And seeing as it was one of the first things I wrote I don't doubt how stiff the dialogue is.
I'll look at it and see if I can soften the flow.

I'm glad you enjoyed it;
that's definitely the most rewarding for a writer.

justanotherlovesong

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Review #2, by jen215

Because Remus is Always Right

10th February 2009:

Cute story! I love how James had to go to Remus for advice, classic. Good job, keep writing.

Author's Response: Thank you so much.
I always love when James goes to Remus for advice with Lily; it always seem more realistic than him following Sirius's advice because he's such a ladies man.

thanks for reading.

justanotherlovesong

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Review #3, by rachy

Because Remus is Always Right

19th October 2008:

hey

that was dead cute! you definitely are good at writing dialogue - please keep writing other fanfics or chapters or whatever - you have a real way with words! i actually loved it, and well done! :]

xx

Author's Response: Thank you so much.

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