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Reading Reviews for Ma Petite Fleur
5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by magicalsquib My Litttle Flower

13th March 2010:
Beautiful, loved it and love your other stories as well.
How did you come up with it?
Magical Squib

Author's Response: Aw Thank You!

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Review #2, by redherring My Litttle Flower

27th May 2009:
Aww, that was so cute! Simply adorable.

"What about names? Don't babies need names?" - Ha! Made me laugh.

Good job!

Author's Response: Oblivious Bill. Hahaha thank you for the review!

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Review #3, by emerald_princess92 My Litttle Flower

10th May 2009:
This was so sweet and really good for a one shot.

Though, be mindful of the spaces between the paragraphs, it leaves to much of a gap and I got annoyed (no surprise, I get annoyed easily ^_^)

anywho, very nice one shot I hope to see more from you!

Author's Response: Yes, I'm sorry you got annoyed! I'm still editing it to make it was great as it ca. Be! Thank you for reviewing!

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Review #4, by collette michelle My Litttle Flower

16th January 2009:
ma petite fleur, my papa tell me this, often. It is one of his phrases. This was good for a first one-shot. I always loved the aspect of Bill and Fleur, they are one of my favourites. I think you portrayed both of them well. Though this whole fic felt a bit rushed, like you hurried through. I feel you could have taken a bit more time to write a bit more to each character.

And for a tip, if you ever want to type out a french accent it helps to listen to someone of french speak english. May I suggest Marion Cotillard. Also it helps to read what others have written a french accent as.

Just thought I have given you some pointer. I hope you don't think I was too harsh (on this or the other fic I reviewed), because I wasn't trying to do. Just thought I'd help you improve. I liked this, I really did!

Author's Response: you are not being harsh at all!i rather have 100 people give me harsh reviews then no reviews. reviews are so authors can make their stories better so thank you. as for Marion Cotillard i no she is my favorite french actress. I think its because i speak both french and english that it is sometimes hard to get the point across. well thank you so much for reviewing!

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Review #5, by Alopex My Litttle Flower

21st December 2008:
I thought it was weird that Fleur lost her accent part of the way through the story. I also am not crazy about the story skipping from the "I'm pregnant" scene right to the birth scene. However, I liked the ending. It was quite touching. Bill is endearing in your story.

Author's Response: thank you for reviewing.i'll look into that and probably make some changes.

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