It is exremely funny and creative. The only thing that keeps popping into my head is that Lily did not know James, Sirius, and Remus before she went to Hogswart. She only knew Severus. Report Review
It is good. At the ending though you said "window" a little too much. Report Review
this sounds like a promising stort write more plz intresting way of starting The Marauders meeting Scarhead Report Review
that was great chapter I wish was longer though and tell us if there is more signifigance to the mirror. P.S. this is your fifth review so post the next one right quick. (: Report Review
Excellent chapter! It's a bit short and could be slightly more descriptive btu I can't wait to read more. Report Review
I like it please leep writing, im new to this and I dont read crap. ; ) Report Review
~Yay! A Lily and Maurarders story! Hehe, great story so far! I'll be waiting for another chapter soon!~ Report Review
Hey, this is good! I like the whole mirror thing. I've been known to do things like that for inspiration! Great so far, I had been hoping when i clicked to go to the next chapter that there were more- please update soon!Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! I'm glad you could connect with a part of my story! It also makes me feel so happy when people request another chapter. The next chapter will be dedicated to you! ^_^ Report Review
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