i like how Sandra and Melissa hate each other despite being on the same team. what's going to happen now? will u update soon please?^_^
Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review! Sandra and Miss are my two favorite characters to write on the team :) I'm glad you liked it! Report Review
great start 4 the 1st chapter.^_^
Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Report Review
i cant wait to read the next chapter! keep up the good work!Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm working on chapter three right now! Report Review
Nice first chapter, and well written too. I'm looking forward to reading more--but change "Puddlemore United" to "Puddlemere United"--I think that's how it's spelled in the books.Author's Response: Thanks for the lovely review! I'm going to go look that up right now! Thanks for pointing that out to me! Report Review
Hey, really good story! You don't get a lot that are Quidditch-centeralled anymore, and this one reads very well. You did a really good job of begining to set the scene for this, though I do hope that we will get to see a little more of Wood now that he's agreed to be on the team. You can deffinatly sense a little Jack/Oliver love interest there, though it is a vague enough possibility now that he could partner up with someone else if he wanted. I really good some of your sense of humor in the previous chapter - "She was only half deaf"... Very good there. It makes you wonder how her having a disability will help - or hinder - the team. I though the part where Miss and Sandra began to fight was quite humorous, and really set the attitude of the story. All in all, a very good job!
Full points, and favorited.
KAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for reading! I'm very glad you enjoyed it. I'm glad that you thought that Miss and Sandra were funny- I worked really hard on that part, trying to make it just right! Thanks again for the wonderful review! Report Review
Oh, I can tell this is going to be a good one.
Nice start, update soon please.Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Updates will come soon, I promise! Report Review
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