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Review #1, by MyMyMiss Hayley, the first female Quidditch player

7th August 2011:
So your summary instantly took me in !! ^.^ For I love Quidditch!!

So lets begin on the lovely words shall we...

First off, I like the name Hayley, I always have, so I like how you made your OC that name, :D Clearly Thomas is always serious about Quidditch and can't lighten up when his playing the game ^.^ Nice tough there, :D x

Nawww, they became friends ^.^ That's great and soo cute ^.^ I thought that had a lovely ending to a good story. Xavier, can be spelt so many ways, but I like the way you spelt it ^.^
'tis good :)

I also like how she corrected him and said she was the first official female quidditch player ^.^ made me giggle >.<

I wouldn't be surprised if this was one of a kind >.< *Inserts heart here*

Forum Name: MyMyMiss
House: Slytherin.

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