So your summary instantly took me in !! ^.^ For I love Quidditch!!
So lets begin on the lovely words shall we...
First off, I like the name Hayley, I always have, so I like how you made your OC that name, :D Clearly Thomas is always serious about Quidditch and can't lighten up when his playing the game ^.^ Nice tough there, :D x
Nawww, they became friends ^.^ That's great and soo cute ^.^ I thought that had a lovely ending to a good story. Xavier, can be spelt so many ways, but I like the way you spelt it ^.^
'tis good :)
I also like how she corrected him and said she was the first official female quidditch player ^.^ made me giggle >.<
I wouldn't be surprised if this was one of a kind >.< *Inserts heart here*
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