I don't know, sounds like spousal abuse BY Ginny. Counseling perhaps? Well written. Report Review
Unbelievable how i manage to bawl my eyes out every single time I hear this song... There are songs that are sadder!
Anyway, still liking the story after having read it... (?) times :) Report Review
write another chapter plzplzplzplzpzlpzlzplzAuthor's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing!!
I do not plan on writing another chapter, but if you'd like to read some of my multi-chapter stories, I have two WIPs up. :] Report Review
Wow, you did a great job with that story! It was really sad (so is the song) but I thought you did a good job. The hopeless romantic in me wishes that got back together in the end but then I guess that's not what happens in the song or where you were going with it.Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing!!
The song is really sad, and when I was writing this it almost physically pained me for it not to end happily, as I am a hopeless romantic too. :]
But I felt that it wouldn't have the same impact if ended happily, so I had to end it that way. Report Review
Thank god this is AU, hah. You made me cry actually - which is not only a sign of a touchy subject but great writing. It was so sad, but you did amazing with it. I was sitting at the edge of my seat hoping that something good would come along and they would make up, things would get good again. But I almost think it's best you left it that way, it would have ruined the mood of the story otherwise. It was fantasticaly written. Very well done.Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm extremely out of my element when I write sad things, and I'm really happy you got so much emotion out of it. And I'm glad that you understood why I ended it on a sad note, because it's terribly hard to explain to people. :] Report Review
LOVE ITTT! I Author's Response: Thanks so much!! Report Review
Aww... cute but sad :(
Keep writing my not-so-furry friend!Author's Response: Thanks so much, my mermaid friend! :]
two words: love it!
xoxAuthor's Response: Thank you so much!! Report Review
It was well written .
but i didn't like the ending.. Haha,
Is there a sequel??
Please Please Please write a sequel!!Author's Response: Thanks!!!
I'm thinking about a sequel, but I'm not sure. This might need to be one that ends sadly. I'll continue to think it over. :] Report Review
What idiots! The best thing for the kids is for them to be together.
LOL. You do know how to write drama. Thank goodness this is AU.Author's Response: Thanks!! Yeah, I agree that the best thing for the kids is for them to be together. :] And yes, thank goodness it's AU. Report Review
This is the best song-fic I have read online. I think you should do a squeal.Author's Response: Thanks so much!!! That means loads to me!! I'm overjoyed that you liked it that much!
I was sort-of thinking about a sequel, but I think that it might need to end sad. I don't know. :/ I'll continue to think about it.
Thanks again!! Report Review
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