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Review #1, by rougette It's MRS. Robinson now...

1st June 2009:
This is a bit short for a chapter and there are serious grammatical and punctual errors but with serious editing, this fic could have serious potential! To say the least, your paragraphs are skewed and your punctuation isn't nearly up to standards...

If you need help with reconstruction (it seems you'll need it for more reads and reviews), feel free to email me chapters to help you with.

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