Reading Reviews for Not Our Fathers
7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Dracolover512 Losing My Religion

24th September 2011:
Pretty Please write the next chapter??? You are so awesome !!

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Review #2, by Sue Losing My Religion

6th May 2009:
I loved it. write more. Please please.

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Review #3, by magic_johnson Losing My Religion

12th April 2009:
nice, but could do with a bit more fluff.
i love the concept (obviously, or else i wouldn't b writing a similar story) but it jumps from one place to another really quickly, and im not sure how long its supposed to be. i know its a short story, but hey, just personal opinion. anyway, pls. keep writing, im enjoying it a lot!

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Review #4, by magic_johnson Ohio Is For Lovers

12th April 2009:
nice concept!
i have to say it was kinda rushed tho.
they got straight down to business too, which i spose u can't complain about, but where to from here?
it doesn't leave many options, i mean theres only so much you can do with the whole passionate lovers vs. jealous boyfriend thing.
still, i really like next gen fics, so ill keep reading!

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Review #5, by ScoroseShipper07 Actions

15th February 2009: could professor Slughorn be able to inspect the room if it was too dark for him to actually see their red faces?

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Review #6, by ScoroseShipper07 Ohio Is For Lovers

15th February 2009:
I usually don't read stories that have an OC nextgen Malfoy, since I strongly believe that Rose/Scorpius is made of love. But that picture you had of Jamie Bell as James Potter was too hard to resist.

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Review #7, by lily Losing My Religion

13th February 2009:
Its good so far i cant wait for the next chapter

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