It is very original.
I really liked it.
Your story was discriptive and vivid.
Keep it up. :DAuthor's Response: aw thanks! I'm glad you liked it! I had lots of fun writing this one shot! :)
I loved your story, though it was quite sad. Great details.Author's Response: I am glad you liked it. I'm looking back on it and it was quite angsty. I'm glad you liked it though! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!! :) Report Review
I really liked this one too! I felt so sorry for her. )= Ending with her resignation was perfect, it leaves a fantastic oppurtunity for you to write a sequel! You could talk about where her life went after she resigned and if she ever found love...I don't know, just an idea.
Anyway, well done on this.
Alex xx (=Author's Response: aw thanks! I wasn't sure if the ending of the resignation was good. I didn't know really where else to end it. I doubt I'll do a sequel. I am not very good at those! :) Report Review
Hello, it's me again! I've come to re-review your story! I've set myself a task of going back and leaving all the reviews that got deleted, and this one was about.. fifth on my list :)
I'm sure I said in my other review that I really enjoyed reading this because Hannah and I share a name (that's not the only reason I liked this, don't worry)! I also think it's nice for her to be the big sister, because generally speaking, big sisters don't really get a wonderful reception.
On the whole, I think that this is a very sweet, touching story. It's kind of sad that she's sad about her sister and Tim, but she does get a little bit of her eighteen-year-old self back in the end. I also would like to mention your excellent descriptive writing, as I think that it gave the story a lot of depth. Very well done :)
-fancycherriiebudAuthor's Response: wow I commend you in trying to re review your faves! I do remember you reading this and reviewing! I'm flattered you think my descriptions are good! I try my hardest to make it sound real. It is sad about her sister but not everything can end happily... I thought the resignation for an ending made it good. Thanks for coming back! :)
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