I liked it! Thank you!

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Such a cute short story. Made me smile and I think you did a fantastic job. : )

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Aaaah. This is so great. James is so smart and Aaaah!!! I love your writing and will write more and longer review when I'm done with all your stories because I'm anxious to read!

Xoxoxo oxo,
Pp123

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I think you should be pleased with it. It was sweet.

I really enjoyed it.

Bravo to you.

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Ouch, a slap to the face. Yeah, her temper can fester and take her over all right.

Bravo to you.

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So he drags her along? Haha, sucks for you Lily. Although we all know you don't really mind.

Bravo to you.

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He's a good person after all, isn't he dear?

Bravo to you.

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Thank you, for making Snape a big part of it. I know how important he was to Lily, but even in my stories I like to pretend he wasn't because there's a lot of old wounds I'm afraid of.

Bravo to you.

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You shouldn't be so hard on your story - I find it sweet and fairly belivable. I like your way of writing romance - you don't overdo it...

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Thank you so much for this little story. I really enjoyed it. I wish you had described the kiss and some cuddling a bit more, but still I like it very much. I find it hard to find anything relatively normal with this pairing. Well done!

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This story is so good. it makes me want to cry, in happiness. It is odd. it's not like thse stories that make me feel warm and fuzzy all the time. it's more sad. but lovely. Its brillaint.

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i thought it was a cute story! i need to read stories like these every once in awhile, a little romance never hurt anybody! 10/10!

Author's Response: lol! Thanks. I'm glad it was cute. I was severely disappointed in myself, especially for ending it so suddenly once I'd had enough - but I am glad that people can still get some enjoyment out of it :D

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"Make tea, not love!"
HELLO!! AND yep thats my fave part rite there!! crazy rite!! anyways great story and i luv it!! its really good !!! so happy u made it!
-LOLhaily!

Author's Response: Thank you!

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Haha this was wonderful!! I loved it :)
"Make tea not love!!" brilliant :D
Thanks for making my day with this!

Author's Response: hehe, I am glad you loved it and thanks for taking the time to leave your opinion. I definitely don't think it's my best lol, but I am thrilled people like it anyway!

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ADORE THIS ENTIRE FREAKING STORY! I think that's all I need to say for this one! *Claps and loads of cookies* - Charly

Author's Response: Thank you! It was really hard to write because I've never been that into romance, and I have a hard time doing it without making it sound really cheesy. But I'm thrilled you liked it so much :D

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Aww I liked it! It was was really good and pretty realistic! :D

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

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this was a great story!! i loved it

Author's Response: hey SiriusLupinDumbledore!!

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it, I hated writing it. I've said all along that I suck at romance, so this was kind of challenging!

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this is the best story ever

Author's Response: hi ally! Thanks for thinking so :) I'm glad you liked it, and am eternally grateful for your review.

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Awww. I loved it. "Make tea not love!". Made my day. =]

Author's Response: Thank you :D

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Lol, I like the ending. It made me laugh :]
This is possibly the best Lily/James cannon I've ever read on here. I like the fact that you stick to the facts of the storie and even mentioned in the last chapter the frogs Lily used to bring home.
And Sirius! I love the way you bring out his character. It's a different approach to him. Alot of others either get him too dark or too much of a ladies man.
Overall, I love the storie so far. And I can't wait to read more of your works after this one.
10/10
-Allie

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm not extremely fond of this story, not being much of a romance fan. It was written to challenge myself, and I'm glad you liked it. I'm hoping to write the last chapter sometime this week if I ever stop procrastinating.

Sirius is lots of fun, though he does turn up a bit darker in my other fics. I suppose seeing him from a different POV here (usually he is my main POV in other fics) causes him to be seen in a lighter way.

Thanks for the fantastic reviews.

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i thought this was pretty good :]


"Yeah, yeah,” James waved him off. “Do me a favor?”

“Anything.”

“Kick Snape’s arse when class is out.”

“You got it,” Sirius grinned pleasurably.

Author's Response: Thanks! It was my first shot at romance, glad you liked it. Everyone seems to like the ending! lol. Sirius is such a good friend, huh? As if he wasn't dying to do it anyway.

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Oooh ! Fluuuff =D Loved it ;P

Author's Response: Really? Haha. I was just saying on the forums that I tried to stay away from fluff. I wonder if romance automatically makes something kind of fluffly?

Thanks for reading :D

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Loved it - this idea was incredibly believable and I loved the way you wrote Lily's self-conciousness, as well as James's reassurance. Can't wait for the next chapter (:

Author's Response: Thank you :D I still need to finish editing this story before I update. I'm glad you find it believable, however, for I flounder with romance.

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Oh come on, why did you stop there!
MAJOR CLIFFHANGER
I want to know what happened
Loved the story, I am currently reading both of them
In my time of dying and far from Flawless
And am loving it

Author's Response: lol, I'm sorry. This story has been in need of edits for quite a while now - and I'm happy with chapters 1-3, but 4 and 5 still need my attention and I just haven't gotten around to it. So that's why I left off - I wanted to fix it first. Sorry!

I'm glad you are enjoying the stories though, that makes me happy :)

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this started out great !
i love james' personality, and i think that you've just about got it right :)
can't wait to read more ^_^

Author's Response: Thank you so much :) Still being edited, but I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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