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Review #1, by CrimsonWitch66 The Hufflepuff's Stand

31st October 2011:
So glad you updated this story.Hufflepuff. My sister was sorted into Hufflepuff and was thrilled - I'm apparently a Gryffindor.

Author's Response: Yes, I realize it has been a long time coming. Minerva's is next. So of course, I will be taking my time with her as well since she is my favorite, but it should go a little faster because I already have experience writing her.

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Review #2, by Aidan The Ravenclaw's Silence

20th October 2011:
I'm going to be honest here, I thunk your taking the Mick. What is the point uploading a story if you haven't got the dedication to update- it's been nearly three months and it's passed a joke!! >:(

Author's Response: I'll be honest. I haven't had time. The second chapter is pretty much done, but it doesn't feel right yet. I'm not going to post something that I don't feel is ready. I'm sorry you feel this way, but that's just the way it is.

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Review #3, by Aidan The Ravenclaw's Silence

17th September 2011:
For god's sake, hurry up an upload! Been waiting ages!

Author's Response: Haha, I am doing my best! School has caught up with me.

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Review #4, by Aidan The Ravenclaw's Silence

4th September 2011:
Really liked this chapter- hurry up and update- been waiting more than week!!

Author's Response: Haha, working hard to update. I have Professor Sprout's almost done.

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Review #5, by mollytaylor The Ravenclaw's Silence

7th August 2011:
This story truly is amazing. I love the whole idea of it, plus the name of the story fits so well! And the banner is pretty awesome to. Well done, and can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you so very much!

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Review #6, by Akussa The Ravenclaw's Silence

4th August 2011:
Hi!

This is a strong opening chapter, I liked it a lot! I found your characterization of Filius very good and I love his keen observation and the attention to details, it gives a lot of emotion to your story.

There were quite a few little things that bothered me though, through my reading and I thought I'd point them out to you so you can improve your story, should you wish to.

In begining, you write "Fiius'" instead of Filius;

"...as he handed the emotion Hufflepuff his handkerchief." I think you mean the "emotional" Hufflepuff;

"Sybil Trewnaly" (when they do the roll call of the teachers) this is badly spelled, it sould be "Sybill Trelawney";

"...without further dely" (almost at the end of the chapter) should be "delay".

Other than that, it was a very enjoyable read. I loved the backstory you put in of Filius' wife and his many pets; it is very fitting! This is a great chapter, I do hope you will keep this story up, I really want to read your take on the other teachers as well!

Akussa (Gryffindor)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this wonderful and helpful review! I have to say, I love reviews like this, because I can really tell you read the story and were willing to help out another writer.
I can honestly say the 'Fiius' thing is because I have a hard time with the i's and l's being next to each other on the computer screen. So I shall go through with a fine tooth comb to correct it though.
The others were real honest mistakes and I thank you for point them out!


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