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Review #1, by Dydo Confession

26th March 2009:
At first, I had no idea that you were a writer here.. and now I am just...O_o Sooo... no comment :)

"I think.I think I'm falling for you"

"I've already fallen"

my heath just started beating faster like I was there ! Very romantic :) Excelent! You really have a sense for theese things ;) Gread work!

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Review #2, by Tommarvoloriddle Confession

25th March 2009:
one of the best fanfiction I ever read.

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Review #3, by nickie02 Diagon Alley

2nd November 2008:
I think you are too hard on yourself, this chapter was not crap. I liked it, I think you are moving the story along, adding just everyday events into the story. I would suggest that you double check your spelling, I just noticed a few words that were incorrectly spelt in this chapter in your other ones. It is a lot, and it is not distracting like some, but I thought I would tell you.

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Review #4, by Happy Rotter Surprises

30th October 2008:
Brilliant chapter, not Entirely sure I agree with Ginny/Draco, but it's your story, anything goes, and I s'pose Draco does have the potential to be alright, he just never gave it a try in the books.

Well, I think i'll get back to reading the story now, talk to ye when I finish the next chapter [waves farewell to Hex]

H.R.

Author's Response: I think without his Father Draco could be a nice guy. Glad you like it.

Hex


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Review #5, by Happy Rotter Confession

30th October 2008:
Seems like an awesome story, the only thing that annoyed me was the ending, so i'm going to read the next chapter now, sorry I can't leave a longer review at the moment...

H.R.

Author's Response: Well cheers for reviewing. Length of the review doesn't matter, just happy you left one.

Hex


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Review #6, by shaunazombie Surprises

22nd October 2008:
Haha, Wolfie, that letter was so Mrs. Weasley, especially the part about having to talk Arthur around, it was really cute. And so was the way Harry went dashing to Hermione's rescue, and it was totally unnessicary! Though I felt betrayed after that cliffhanger. *Mumbles about writers*

And I really liked the comment about Draco having to be careful around the Weasley boys, that was well done. Actually, all the dialogue in this is good, I think you've done great with showing that Harry and Hermione care for each other, you have nothing to worry about with writing romance, you're very good at it.

I'm pretty excited to see what happens in the next chapter, you seem to have a really solid plot to work with, and this doesn't seem at all like a typical Harry/Hermione!

Fantabulous job!

Shauna

Author's Response: Well I read a fanfic once where Mrs. Weasley blew up in their faces over them getting together. It was well written and fun to read but I never thought she'd re-act that way. I thought she'd be dissapointed but smart enough to let Harry be happy after all he's gone through.

I thought the cliff hanger was awesome. The last thing you were expecting at the very least. *Mumbles about Shaunie" :P

Glad once again that you're enjoying it.
Wolfie


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Review #7, by shaunazombie Confession

22nd October 2008:
How rude, Wolfie! I really want to just go to the next chapter, but you deserve a review, my friend! I can't believe no one else has left one.

Anyway, first thing, I think you did romance really well, so it kind of suprised me that you said in your Author's note that you weren't familiar with it. I thought the emotions came across really well, especially Ron's sense of betrayl and his anger, it was really convincing. I felt really bad for him, but I loved how you put that Hermione realised what she had to do thanks to Hufflepuff's Cup, that was a nice touch.

Ginny/Draco isn't a ship I see very often, so I can't wait to see how that progresses. I thought the flow was very nice, and the dialogue between Harry and Hermione was really sweet and well written.

And the cliffie! Lol, nice job, Wolfie, is was kind of cruel to you, but the suspense was great, I can't wait to see what happens.

Excellent job!
Shauna

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Even if I only entertain 1 person it'll be worth it.
Personally I don't think I did the Ginny/Draco part to well but I guess I must've done something right lol.

I can't wait to see what happens either. I've only really planned the ending and even that's pretty vague still.

Glad you like it
Wolfie


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