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Review #1, by LynnHelven Remembering Lily

24th October 2008:
That was truly brilliant. You have a talent for beginnings and endigs, and this was particularly strong. I was captivated frm the third word, and my only regret is that there is no more. You have captured the personalities of both Lily and Rems perfectly, and I loved the scenes you included, which were well thought out and beautifully described. This really was excellent, I really enjoyed reading it.

10/10

Author's Response: Thank-you very much! I'd heard no feedback on this story before your review, so I was very excited to see it! I'm happy to hear you liked how I wrote these two characters.

Again, thanks for taking the time to review. You put a big smile on my face!
-H.F. =0]


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