That was very very good. I really like it. 12/10 Great work! Report Review
Aw...that was sweet! Harry broods too much though, but we already knew that. Awesome job.
PS: I was wondering if you were ever going to post on Auld Lang Syne again. I love that story and really miss reading it. I was just curious though.
PPS: I think I'm going to have to head over to read some of your other stories, because I like this one and Auld Lang Syne so much. Awesome. Report Review
Okay, so since my review was lost, I'm reviewing again. Need I say that I loved this one-shot so much, Juls. You are probably the first person who actually convinced me to read a Harmony. I mean, I hate this ship with a passion. But you pulled it off so nicely in this one-shot that I actually enjoyed reading it. And the song...it's love! It flows so well with the story and you've done justice to Harry's thoughts as well. I like it all, Juls. You have a gift, really. LOVEYA! *huggles* Report Review
This seems sort of strained, but given the nature of the challenge I can't blame you. It's really poetic and flows naturally until she wakes up, but that's when the heart of the story comes out and that's when I figured out whether you were sinking or swimming here. I love what the song adds to it! Moves it along nicely and I think it keeps you on track as a reader. I love love love the single line standing out (You know that there's so much more) - it brings home the point so well, and I'm not familiar with the song so I don't know if it's emphasized there, but it really worked wonders for the pacing of the story. Not a Harmonian, but this was fun to read! Report Review
Great little insightful story. Almost like a missing section, "If you can't be with the one you love (or thought you loved...) Love the one you're with" Report Review
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