lol, loved the story..i know i've read this before, like ages ago..and i might have left a review then too..but just want to say that this was quite good..
i'm a big fan of your stories and i had to read it when i saw it was by you :)

the middle did get a little fluffy, but you brought it back in the end..

fav line: Ava looked up at her with knitted brows and pursed lips. "What did that man mean Mummy?"

"About what, hun?"

"Sexwal tenson," she replied, pouting slightly as she couldn’t quite form the words.

that bit had me cracking up..

good work, and i reckon you could have like a mini sequel to this...i would love to see how draco would interact with his daughter...and his son if hes born by then :)

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perfect. i honestly wish you'd write longer, more serious stories about D/H with the same sense of humor. the internal dialogue is particularly hilarious. "decidedly humble" - HAH.

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I love it! This is one of the best dramione one shots I've read. The ending is great! You are a fantastic writer, please keep writing!

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Cool story, loved it! Go Henry!

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I LOVED this story :D
And it definitely made me laugh !
It was also great that you kept Draco like he was in the books (haughty, all Malfoy-like) and Hermione too (know-it-all, bossy,...) and managed to make that work together ! Most people soften their personalities to make a good couple.

Again, great story :D

Nina x

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Haha, love Ava! I see you like playing with your adult figures (Lucius and now Shacklebolt!) Great stuff, I really do prefer them this way! As ridiculously OOC characters!

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i wanna read Draco abd Ava's Convo on sexual tension!
i reall liked this!

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i positively loved it

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That was very cute! Wonderful job. I loved the ending with Ava's question, too. Keep up the good work! 10/10 ~Jen

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I loved this story!
It was so utterly fantastic!
I loved the jealousy going on with Draco about Henry.

Brilliant!

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lmao thats sooo funny.
sooo sweet. i love your short stories. sooo quirky! :)
ava is absolutely adorable and gotta love sexwal tenson eh?

haha.

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brilliant. i don't care how ooc that was it was funny and wonderfully lighthearted. just what i needed.
Dilys :)

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that is really good.
you did a nice scene with the shirt!!!
LOL!!!
-coco

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new banner? i like it! i know this is just a fluff piece, but i read it over and over on days when i just don't want to think anymore. thanks so much, i love all your one shots, they're great stress breakers =]

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hahaha, I loved it! it was really great. but i have to tell you, i love the language you use. I actually reread a couple of sentences because I thought they were beautiful!
xoxo

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ahhahahahahahah
ahhahahahah oh man sxwal tenson heheheheh aww that was the cutest thing ever poor draco heheheh
lol i loved the one shot i had a feeling that henry was sent to watch them i enjoyed the oneshot

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love it!
very very nice one.
heartfelt.

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i love it.both have nice tempers.

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I LOVED this story! I can't really think of what to say except that Once I started reading I just couldn't stop. I especially Love the ending, so CUTE! I look forward to browsing through more of your work, you have talent.

Keep Writing!
Kaida Salene (not signed in, forgot to *sweatdrop*)

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