I really enjoyed this one shot, you managed to catch the boys emotions so wonderfully in such short descriptions, and it was easy to spot which boy was which from the way you wrote about their feelings. I really loved how you wrote that they only really needed each other. It really shows just how close they were with each other.
A very good story :-D

Author's Response: I'm just so intrigued by their friendship. I'm glad you love it too and enjoyed my humble interpretation! x

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That was really good! The only critiscm I have is that your spacing was a little off, making it sort of difficult to read. But from a writing quality standpoint, I really like it!!! 9/10

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I think this was one of my first stories and I had no idea how to work the internet hahaha.

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Short but amazing! Really nice to see them like that. Loved the way you said like 'the serene one' and 'the striking one'. Really good.
marauderqueen
100

Author's Response: Hey there :) Aw, thank you so much! I'm really pleased you liked it.

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You wrote a new story?. and. didn't tell me? *gasp*

Wow, I loved it. You really really can write. I can't believe how well you can write in like just seven hundred words. You are so good at getting the point across and what not.

I loved it Laur and Government. It's so good. I love the marauders, as you know? Hahahaha. Go Sirius and James! Remus, super sexy in a wolfish way. It's all good.

I gotta run to school.
I LUFF YOU

Author's Response: LOL. Hey Rach :) Nah, it's not a new story. It just lost all it's reviews in the site crash a while back :P

Aw, I luff you. You're so sweet. Thank you so much. Your reviews are so lovely!

xx

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*sigh*
This was amazing. The lack of dialogue was just perfect. I'm glad you only used one line, because it really conveys the 'thought' aspect of the story.

I love the actions of each of the boys. It's just enough - I like that you leave it like this rather than going into too much detail like some people would do.

It was really easy to relate to. I was sat with my best friend the other day, and we can just sit there for ages not saying anything, yet it isn't boring. I totally understand where you're coming from with this.

There's not much else to say. The length was perfect. You got across the message in that length and that's all that matters :)
It was wonderful

x

Author's Response: Hey there! Wow, thanks so much for this incredibly lovely review :)

I'm so glad that I managed to get everything across. I was really worried that the length would put off a lot of people. Aw, thanks so much!!

xx

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Wow Laura that was so beautiful, this is going to sound so lame, but it made me cry of personal reasons, It was so great And Lovely. My personal reason: I hate when your friends changes and leave you for being to geeky or whatever. This was so... wonderful and pure. I love how you describe things < 3 If you write more of this kind of story please tell me I would be happy to read and review! by the way I really liked that it was short ;)

Author's Response: Hey Sara! Thanks so much for leaving this lovely review :) I'm so happy you liked it! Not sure if I should be happy or not that it made you cry. Haha. Thanks dearie :D xx Laura

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