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Review #1, by Ginny Crosby A Troubled Girl

8th May 2006:
I think it could be longer... OH NO! I sound like other peole! I hate when they say it's too short! Well it's longer than any of mine! lol! :)

Author's Response: Lol thanks. Its ok if you say it needs to be longs it probably does but that's ok. I like it. lol. I'm sure yours are fine also. lol. thanks much
Ciao
Chelsea Lynn


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Review #2, by mrs_harrypotter Is It Over

8th April 2006:
the plot is good but do you mind if i make a suggestion? if you want to write a sequel, and you want to make the chappies longer, then you will have to-every time somebody says something-put it in a new paragraph. just like j.k. does!!!

Author's Response: hey thanks so much!!!

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Review #3, by Kami A Troubled Girl

3rd April 2004:
read and review essence of you life by shiseidox or she will delete it!!!!

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Review #4, by Kami A Troubled Girl

3rd April 2004:
read and review essence of you life by shiseidox or she will delete it!!!!

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Review #5, by Andie Is It Over

13th December 2003:
It was pretty good. But you have to learn to write a little better and use better grammar. But it was still good.

Author's Response: thanks...yea my grammer sucks i'm working on it

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Review #6, by BlueEclipse A Troubled Girl

2nd August 2003:
um ur married couples need re pairing

Author's Response: i don't see why....i like it...

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Review #7, by forsakenphoenix A Troubled Girl

30th July 2003:
It\'s not bad. A few grammatical errors (ie. spelling) Nice plot. Though I\'m not sure the students would be allowed to learn the Unforgiveable curse, especially Avada Kedavra. But it\'s your story--keep up the good work.

Author's Response: yea but that's why i'm writting...mauhahaha!!! i can do anything i want with them...ok power surge over with...lol

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