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Review #1, by Karou_Marauder Chapter ONE

16th March 2014:
Hiya!

Interesting start! The pink-hair prank sounds like it would have been very funny to watch, but very disturbing for poor Monsieur Alphonse.

I'm not sure if she would be able to just walk right in...but then, I guess Harry and Ron did something slightly similar with the car and they didn't have any trouble walking into school.

Aha, the Marauders! Dani clearly doesn't like Sirius all that much, and she's definitely on the ball with Peter! I hope she warns them against him and I hope they listen to her.

And I wonder what's going to happen with McGonagall...

Great story!

-Karou

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