Haha that was funny, I especially liked the "Still seething she lowered the small red lolly from her mouth and her rose colored lips pressed together in a small scowl effectively drawing Harry’s attention there, and promptly causing another groan. ‘Bugger!’ *Thud*" part, it had me laughing aloud.

I found it both funny and sexy 10/10

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Hilariously devious!

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its alright and very funny. i'm starting to like you very much. not that i didnt like you before. but could u please upload all urstories on wattpad? i have read like 2 or 3 there. again what does ja ne mean?

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I love this story, very cute.
Just a small question, did you write a story called the snogging chronichals? If so what happened to it? It was on my favorites, butwhen I clicked on it, it said it was deleated. If you didint write it I'm sorry i have a bad memory!!! But... I miss that story!!!

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i loved it make more chapters but next make Hermione suck chocolate ;) *wink wink*

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ah, the age old question ... that i will never be able to satisfactorily answer on my own, as i abhor tootsie rolls. but i digress. i found this while searching for stories of my new second favorite ship (the first being cedric/hermione) and this did not disappoint. i love how cocky neville is- rather unexpected but somehow perfectly appropriate. just wish they'd hooked up at the end, but it was still a delightful read. 8.75/10

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EXCELLENT!!! That was hilarious. You should make it into a series getting worse and worse until Harry finally cracks. It would be brilliant. Great stuff.

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haha, I love this! great idea for a FanFic, and I love how Ron was completely oblivious and Neville was laughing on the inside. Nice!

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lol awesome
how bout a sequel to that one

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That was highly entertaining! I hope you have a sequel to this. Hehe.

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LOI, I love it! I can so imagine that happening! Excellent job!

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Oh wow, I loved that, it was very enjoyable, and funny too. :)

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Loved it. It was quite clever. A great one shot.
~Meg

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OH MY GOD! hillarious :D I love the way Harry reacted and I love the way Ron always manages to not keep up with what's going on around! This was an awsome piece of writing :)

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I feel really sorry that you lost all of your reviews but here's one more to add to the 5 you already have.

I loved the story. I think you used words like "my readheaded friend" too much or "chocolate eyes". I don't know. I find it kind of weird when writers put those words in they're stories but I guess you could do it a couple of times.

Just my suggestion. You don't have to follow it if you don't want to. Loved the plot of the story though. It was extremely funny at the end. I didn't quite get what was going on until Hermione bit into the sucker.

10/10 for a good plot!!!

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I really liked it! Hilarious! Great idea! :7)

Author's Response: Thank you very much!! ^.^

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Hi there! I was just surfing around the site, looking at other people's favorite stories when I found a familiar name... It was yours, obviously :D I'm leaving a review for this funny one-shot so I can track you down again and come back to read that Snogging Chronicle thing when I'm not feeling extremely tired like right now x)

This was a nice one-shot. It was so funny how Harry was having such a hard time watching Hermione with the Tootsie Pop :D It seemed like the story could have been longer, though. Was the only goal to make Harry uncomfortable? Well, it was nice anyways.

(In case you don't remember, I was one of the loyal readers of Ace of Hearts :) )

Author's Response: I member!!! ^.^

Yes the story was just to make Harry squirm a bit, it was a one-shot that I wrote for a contest. It actually started off as a Sailormoon fanfiction that I wrote then changed over to the HP universe for the site contest. I'm glad you liked it and thanks for your reviews!!

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hahaha...oh my gosh that was brilliant! I love how perfectly devious that whole setup was!

Author's Response: Yep, that schemeing Hermione *lol* And Nevilee and Luna helping out becasue they're just that great :D

I'm glad you liked it and thanks for reviewing.

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Poor Harry! That's just teasing! But it's oh, so much fun! Awesome job again on another story.

~Krystle Lynne~

PS: Have you thought about doing a sequel? I think it'd be awesome if you did!

Author's Response: *lol* He knows he liked it XD

I'm glad you enjoyed the story and thanks for reviewing.

No I haven't really considered a sequel... but who knows, maybe one day...

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lol wow u have so got to finish this story

Author's Response: *lol* Well at least for now it's finished, but thanks for reading and really thanks for reviewing it!!

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