That was so incredibly sad. OH. MY. GOD. It was so sweet though! I Loved it! Congrats!*claps and a cookie* -CharlyAuthor's Response: Wow! Thanks so much. The 'OH. MY. GOD.' completely made my day. Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you liked the story! Report Review
Oh, you know I love this song...and every single time I hear it, I always think of Lily and James. It's perfection, and you did an excellent job with this. And the best thing is that it is very time appropriate, which I adore. Great flow, and gave the song even more punch for the next time I hear it.Author's Response: Ah, I knew you'd love the Blue Oyster Cult tune. I couldn't get them out of my mind the last time I listened to it. Thanks so much for the review, you make my day. :D Report Review
Hey, thanks for your review, I am not on vacation, when the site crashed it changed my personal info, I'll change that soon. I am going to replace all the reviews I left for your chapters sometime. I am sorry you lost so many.
This is such a sad story, but sweet. I like the dialogue between James and Lily best. It was nice because of how Lily was scared and James was the strong one.
And I liked the end. It is sad that she died but how she died, why she died was not bad.
Also, If Sirius was so angry at Peter, saying he should have died, then if Lily had've lived then he would have probably done the same to her.
Great job!Author's Response: Your welcome - I'm truly sorry that you lost all MY reviews!
Don't worry about replacing them if you don't have time, but I am truly flattered for the offer. -wibble-
Yes, it is sad. I almost cried when I wrote it. I'm glad you liked it. :} Report Review
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