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3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Miranda Cold as You

20th January 2009:
Oh, wow, I love Taylor Swift. After this, I think I'm starting to like Lavender. You make her really sympathetic in this shot. The lyrics fit beautifully.

A really excellent job. 10/10

Author's Response: That's what I was aiming for with this fic. Lavender was always portrayed as silly. It was about time someone saw how she could be.

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Review #2, by DeathMakesArtists Cold as You

28th December 2008:
Oh, wow. Lavander is so sad and bitter, I feel so bad for her! Honestly Ron was a bit of a jerk to her, he should've thought about her feelings before he did what he did.
Anyways, I think this was a very good story! I liked how well Lavander's emotions were portrayed, she wasn't just a backgroud character, she was a real person with feelings, and she was hurt. I especially like the last line/paragraph. I just caught one little mistake: it's spelled Parvati. Besides that, it was awesome! :) Keep it up!

Author's Response: Ooo, guess I missed that bit. Thanks for pointing it out. Glad you like the story. It's one of my few one-shots

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Review #3, by TheDirigiblePlum Cold as You

13th November 2008:
As much as I love Ron, after reading this story I have to admit he was a bit mean. In HPB it sounds funny what he did to Lavender, but I guess it wasn't really. :)

Lavender is much less annoying in this story than she is in the HP books, and that made it enjoyable reading! :D You made me feel more sympathy for her that I originally did.

10/10

Author's Response: Thanks.

I do think it was kind of mean how Ron treated Lavender. To him, she was just a ploy to make Hermione jealous. And that's just not right.

I'm glad you like the story. I didn't at first (I'm my worst critic) and didn't know if I should put it on here.


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