Oh, wow, I love Taylor Swift. After this, I think I'm starting to like Lavender. You make her really sympathetic in this shot. The lyrics fit beautifully.
A really excellent job. 10/10Author's Response: That's what I was aiming for with this fic. Lavender was always portrayed as silly. It was about time someone saw how she could be. Report Review
Oh, wow. Lavander is so sad and bitter, I feel so bad for her! Honestly Ron was a bit of a jerk to her, he should've thought about her feelings before he did what he did.
Anyways, I think this was a very good story! I liked how well Lavander's emotions were portrayed, she wasn't just a backgroud character, she was a real person with feelings, and she was hurt. I especially like the last line/paragraph. I just caught one little mistake: it's spelled Parvati. Besides that, it was awesome! :) Keep it up!Author's Response: Ooo, guess I missed that bit. Thanks for pointing it out. Glad you like the story. It's one of my few one-shots Report Review
As much as I love Ron, after reading this story I have to admit he was a bit mean. In HPB it sounds funny what he did to Lavender, but I guess it wasn't really. :)
Lavender is much less annoying in this story than she is in the HP books, and that made it enjoyable reading! :D You made me feel more sympathy for her that I originally did.
10/10Author's Response: Thanks.
I do think it was kind of mean how Ron treated Lavender. To him, she was just a ploy to make Hermione jealous. And that's just not right.
I'm glad you like the story. I didn't at first (I'm my worst critic) and didn't know if I should put it on here. Report Review
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