5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by FriendofMolly Chapter 5: It Comes a Time When We All Have to Say Goodbye

10th November 2008:
Just right. How could the funeral of Fred not have humor? The letter was brilliant. I'm glad you haven't made George morose and mental (as many AtB do). Thank you. I hope you have another in queue. I'll be watching.

Author's Response: Heavens no...George is needing to move on. By moving on he uses his memories of his and Fred's time to do it.

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Review #2, by FriendofMolly I Know We Belong

10th November 2008:
This is so good. The comfort of the Burrow, and the Weasley's themselves. George snapping back with the joke about sticking bet money in Fred's casket. Your plot and substance is very canon and highly addictive. Must read more!!!

Author's Response: I don't read fanfiction that is not cannon because I can't stand it so I generally don't write anything that's not cannon. I am so glad that you like it though.

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Review #3, by FriendofMolly Chapter 3: I Promise You From the Bottom of My Heart

9th November 2008:
Another good chapter. I am really enjoying your story. Where did Ron get so mature? Though I don't quite agree with his self depreciating assessment. Ron wasn't just there for mood lightening, Harry needed his tactical skills. Not to mention his innate wary nature. Go to read more.

Author's Response: I feel like Ron got mature from running away from Harry and Hermione in the last book. He found out more about himself away from the other two then he would have if he was with them.

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Review #4, by FriendofMolly Chapter 2: Look Through My Eyes

9th November 2008:
Wow. Ginny and Harry get down to the heart of the matter. A really good chapter. Your version is written well and captures the reader. I read mostly AtB's, yours has promise. So I promise to keep reading.

Author's Response: Thanks, I love writing fanfiction but tend not to for the fact that I am not the author of the characters. I try to get the right characters.

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Review #5, by FriendofMolly Chapter 1: Hate Me Today

9th November 2008:
Oh yeah. This was a really good first chapter. I liked how you had Ginny going after Harry. She knowing, that he was running away from what he saw as his mistake. Her having the patience to wait him out, and him feeling exhausted, but safe enough to sleep with Ginny there. Ron's reaction was stupendous. You have a talent for our favorite characters feelings. I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Yeah, I always picture Ginny knowing that Harry needs time to gather his thoughts.

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