{reviewid: 2516714, reviewer: 'Donya'}
2nd May 2011:
She's.dead.
I was not expecting that.
Author's Response: Kinda what I was planning
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{reviewid: 2298877, reviewer: 'x%20DementraFionBlack%20x'}
14th February 2010:
I love this story but i now officially hate you.
Ok im only joking i just cant believe that you ended it like that xx i actually cried and i didnt want to cry but seriously you are an amasind writer and it would be soo cool if you could read mine for me and see what you think i would love it xxx
Author's Response: I will come by and read yours but I feel Killy her at the end needed to happen
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{reviewid: 2222080, reviewer: 'FallenAmaranth'}
22nd September 2009:
sorry i just have to point out, at one point you put carly/charis' name as charlie. i thought it was funny cause of it's kinda half way in between. lol. i think it amazing. another thing, i've always wondered how voldie reproduced, at the age of 66 he has a 15 year old daughter. heh heh. great story.
Author's Response: Well he would have been about 50-ish... Take into consideration how long wizards live, and in any caase, men of 80 in reality have reproduced... Voldemort havign a kidn isn't that strange.
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{reviewid: 2110587, reviewer: 'gothicbabe16'}
3rd May 2009:
this is the first story i've read that brings some serious emotion in me. kinda sad u can't put a twist that would make her be in a coma then wake up.
Author's Response: I was going to, I really didn't want to kill Carly, Imagine what it did to Sirius, Tonks, Andromeda and Draco... But I think the fact she did die to save them jsut proves her character that much more.
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{reviewid: 2088374, reviewer: 'Lily123Evans%20'}
3rd April 2009:
Amazing story. great idea! Loved it so much! Awesome job!
Author's Response: Thank you!
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{reviewid: 2080776, reviewer: 'Samantha'}
22nd March 2009:
Aw, did you have to kill her?? That was possibly the saddest ending ever. :[
Author's Response: Maybe not, but i did regardless
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{reviewid: 2080764, reviewer: 'Samantha'}
22nd March 2009:
Another cliff-hanger. I love this story. It's amazing.
Author's Response: thank you :) xx
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{reviewid: 2080758, reviewer: 'Samantha'}
| Review #8, by Samantha | Maybe |
22nd March 2009:
Wow, Carly's pretty brave to just up and leave to save everyone - even if it means her own death.
Author's Response: that's who carly is, she couldn't do anything else, this is what her personality dictates she does
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{reviewid: 2080753, reviewer: 'Samantha'}
| Review #9, by Samantha | Gone |
22nd March 2009:
I kind of agree with Carly. Hopefully Draco is okay.
Author's Response: One would hope
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{reviewid: 2080749, reviewer: 'Samantha'}
22nd March 2009:
:] The ending to this chapter made me smile.
Again, you are amazing at writing the action scenes.
Author's Response: Aw thank you, action is one of the things i find hardest to write
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{reviewid: 2080742, reviewer: 'Samantha'}
| Review #11, by Samantha | Sorry? |
22nd March 2009:
I'm confused by what just happened at the end. Haha, I guess I'll just have to read more and find out. xD
Author's Response: sorry, sometimes it is a lil confusing
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{reviewid: 2080713, reviewer: 'Samantha'}
22nd March 2009:
You're really good at writing the action scenes. I loved this chapter.
Author's Response: Aw thanks, they're really hard to write
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{reviewid: 2080699, reviewer: 'Samantha'}
| Review #13, by Samantha | Loved |
22nd March 2009:
Aw, I love this! I'm so happy for Carly. :]
Author's Response: you should be, this is greaat
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{reviewid: 2080696, reviewer: 'Samantha'}
22nd March 2009:
Carly Black - I like the sound of that. Haha. I love this.
Author's Response: I thouhgt it had a ring to it
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{reviewid: 2080690, reviewer: 'Samantha'}
22nd March 2009:
Finally, Charis stands up to Harry.
Author's Response: someone needed to
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{reviewid: 2080688, reviewer: 'Samantha'}
22nd March 2009:
I really like this story. :]
Author's Response: thank you :)
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{reviewid: 2080686, reviewer: 'Samantha'}
22nd March 2009:
Gr, Harry is too hot-headed. He should at least talke to Charis.
Author's Response: Probably, but he won't
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{reviewid: 2080681, reviewer: 'Samantha'}
22nd March 2009:
I love Ginny and Charis's friendship. :]
Author's Response: It's pretty cool
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{reviewid: 2080679, reviewer: 'Samantha'}
| Review #19, by Samantha | Carly |
22nd March 2009:
Sirius is so nice. I hope Tonks and Harry accept Charis soon.
Author's Response: MAybe they will... Maybe not
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{reviewid: 2080676, reviewer: 'Samantha'}
22nd March 2009:
I really like the fact that Ginny is being nice to her. Charis needs someone there for her. :]
Author's Response: yeah, but everyone neededs someone
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{reviewid: 2080673, reviewer: 'Samantha'}
22nd March 2009:
I feel bad for Charis. :[
Author's Response: Well at least I got you to feel what i wnated you to.
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{reviewid: 2080666, reviewer: 'Samantha'}
22nd March 2009:
I had a feeling Harry would react like that. This is good so far. :]
Author's Response: Yeah, harry is pretty predictable
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{reviewid: 2080661, reviewer: 'Samantha'}
22nd March 2009:
I like this so far. :]
Author's Response: Yay. glad you do
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{reviewid: 2071126, reviewer: 'fullmoontonightO'}
8th March 2009:
awww... poor carly! i dunno, i thought she'd die but... man i hate moldyvort. like a lot. great story though! give sirius and everybody hugs for me, kay? byyee! ^-^
Author's Response: Huge hugs for you, and thanks :)
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{reviewid: 2071117, reviewer: 'fullmoontonightO'}
8th March 2009:
ooh it all just keeps gettin better and better! hmm what will happen next, i wonder?
(i know, i know: keep reading ^-^)
Author's Response: lol eyah, jsut keep reading
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