nice... can you extend the story line...

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I loved it !
I was a bit surprised at how fast Scorpius was falling, but very cute and sweet :)
Aww .. 'You're lovely when you blush.'
:) Great job, keep writing !

Author's Response: I admit, this isn't one of my best. I guess I just needed to get it out. But I'm glad you enjoyed it nevertheless. =)

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Aw, that was pretty cute :3
I loved it!

Zup :)

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Lovely. Favorite line: "Too bad it had taken her until she had been blind to realize it."

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Aw, this was so stinkin' lovely! I abaolutely adored it.

The writing was beautiful and the characterizations wonderful. Rose was great and Scorpius too, and I really admire how in the span of a short time you managed to build up the characters so strongly. It was great.

The last line was adorable. Loved it and loved the wonderful moral of forgiveness. Absolutely gorgeous.

Oh, and FYI, I have read "101 things to say to your worst enemy to avoid awkward silences" by I. Phil Confused and it's really a lovely book:)

Great job! Loved it to heck!

Squid

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OMG!! that was SO cute!! i LOVED it!!!

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I very much enjoyed reading your one-shot. Well written, and not too fluffy. Just right. :)

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Love the story.
I think it's perfect and sweet.
You should write a sequel!
:)
Peace.

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Cheese :D

But it was sweet. I liked the idea of Rose becoming blind... it was different. Good.

7.9/10... rounded up to 8, I guess

:]

Author's Response: I don't write much fluff so it was good to have a break and get something sweet out there. I'm glad you enjoyed it. =)

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AW!! Very cute story :)

Author's Response: Thank you!

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Awww sweet?! are you kidding? it was bloody adorable. I was sitting in front of my computer with that 'aww' look on my face. like when you see a little labrador puppy come bounding towards you, then fall over, and then try to get up. that's how sweet this story is.

seriously. i just compared it to a cute puppy.

it was very well-written well done!

xx

Author's Response: Haha! Well, that's the most interesting comparison I've heard thus far. Congratulations! And thank you very much, Kai. I'm so very glad you enjoyed it. =)

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That was really cute I enjoyed it
& i loved the plot idea very original.

Author's Response: Thanks very much, darling! =)

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Oh my God, that was adorable :) I l-o-v-e-d it! It was sweet and fluffy and just gorgeous! Well done!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much! =)

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“I wish you could see me.”

“I can see you.”

i had to cover my face with my hands, because it was too adorable.

brownies for you!

Author's Response: Naw, thanks so much! =)

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gotta love one-shots!
short and sweet! :]

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! =)

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This was brilliant! I loved it! You're a talented writer! xD

Author's Response: Thank you so much! =)

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ahh. that was cute. good job! 10/10! they both actually seemed more tolerable when she was blind... :)
-xoxo, rowenaravenclaw94

Author's Response: Teehee, I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

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I like this one-shot. Scorpius seemed so... just adorable, lol. Lucky Rose.

=P 10/10, of course!

--Kate/RP

Author's Response: Teehee, thank you so much, Kate! =)

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Hi, I just wanted to say, Wow Of all the finished R/S one shots I have to say that yours is the best I've seen. I swear you bring subtle to a whole new level. You don't say much, and you certainly leave out a lot (like what happens between hour 1 and hour 3 of confinement, etc) and somehow I don't find myself making great leaps of imagination as to why there's so much chemistry between them. You've a real skill at saying a lot with only a few lines - you don't ramble and your sentences are down-to-earth and concise. And then when you do stick some flowery fancy device in there it totally fits as if you've been using them all the time in this mostly dialogue fanfic. (I really liked the “they’re like the ocean after a storm" comment about Rose's eyes...wonderful imagery there!)

Like really, I have nothing to complain about. What is there to complain about? Even if there were grammatical errors I'm sure I would have forgotten all about them =)

Author's Response: W-o-w. Miranda, seriously. WOW. I don't know what to say. It means so much to me to have you say that. It's so amazing to hear that my work can be appreciated in a way that's not just people wanting to find out how or why Rose and Scorpius get together. I love knowing people can see past the simple sentences and notice the subtlety I always drop into my work. You're one of the only ones who can, Miranda. Thank you so much for your very kind words. I will go to sleep a happy girl tonight. xD

Thanks again!

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awww very cute :D i like it :D REALLY good :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! That means a lot!

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Wonderful! It was lovely and sweet and romantic and tingly in that typical way of your writing.

Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much, hunny!

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aww that was so cute
and it wud have been better if the title was "Love is blind"
it goes well with the story...
good job ",

Author's Response: I like that title, but I think that 'I Spy' suits just as well, also. Thank you. =)

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It's really cute . Like REALLY cute . It totaly made my day . I was smiling the entire time . So thanks !
And congrats !

10/10
Anna

Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much, Anna! You've made my day, too!

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aw! this is soo cute! and create too. not the normal rose/scorpius

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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Actually it does make sense because I actually think like that sometimes. I loved the story. The first Rose/Scorpius I can read all the way through. Great Job

Author's Response: Hooray for me! Thanks so much, hunny. =)

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